Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答不够连贯，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议练习完整句子的表达，避免断断续续的回答，并且直接回答问题。

例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I always try to help others when they are in trouble, no matter how long it takes.

提案: 回答中有语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，注意句子结构，并且使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I feel impatient when people are late because I value punctuality. For example, if someone is late for school, it makes me feel frustrated because I think being on time is very important.

提案: 回答中有拼写和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议注意单词拼写，使用连接词如“however”正确连接句子，并且表达更完整。

例: I often feel bored and tired when I have to do something for a long time because it can be repetitive. However, I try to stay focused and persevere by taking short breaks to refresh my mind.

提案: 回答断断续续，语法和词汇错误较多。建议练习连贯表达，使用完整句子，并且准确使用相关词汇。

例: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience because I am majoring in law. In the future, legal work will need patience for tasks like reading cases and reasoning carefully.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整的问题。建议使用完整句子，注意时态和词汇的准确性，使表达更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. For example, I used to get angry easily when things were delayed or small problems occurred. However, now I try to control my emotions and stay calm.

× Of course I'm impatient. Person.

✓ Of course, I'm a patient person.

原句结构混乱，'impatient'与问题不符，且'Person'单独成句不合语法。应改为'I'm a patient person'，表达清晰且符合语法。

× When people get in. Trouble. To ask questions.

✓ When people get in trouble and ask questions,

原句断句不当，导致语义不完整。应将断句合并，形成完整的从句。

× Whatever how long is takes.

✓ No matter how long it takes.

原句表达不正确，'Whatever how long is takes'语法错误，应使用固定表达'No matter how long it takes'。

× someone right late it made me feel ancient becauses I William punctuality.

✓ someone was right late, it made me feel anxious because I value punctuality.

原句中'tense'错误，'right late'应为'was right late'，'ancient'用词错误，应为'anxious'，'becauses'拼写错误，应为'because'，'William'误用，应为'value'。

× Pain on time were important to me, so wait for orders can be quite frustrating.

✓ Being on time is important to me, so waiting for others can be quite frustrating.

原句中'Pain on time'用词错误，应为'Being on time'，'wait for orders'应为'waiting for others'，语法和用词均需调整。

× I often feel bored and tired when I have to do something for a long time because it can be right.

✓ I often feel bored and tired when I have to do something for a long time because it can be quite repetitive.

原句中'right'用词错误，应为'quite'，且缺少形容词'repetitive'来描述动作。

× however I try to stay focused an preserve pre severe by taking short breaks to refresh my mind.

✓ However, I try to stay focused and persevere by taking short breaks to refresh my mind.

原句中'and preserve pre severe'拼写错误，应为'and persevere'，且句首'however'后应加逗号。

× The future law work needs more patient on. Kays reading an. Reasoning.

✓ Future law work needs more patience in case reading and reasoning.

原句中'more patient on'用词错误，应为'more patience in'，且'Kays'拼写错误，应为'case'。

× I used to get angry easy when things were delighted or.

✓ I used to get angry easily when things were delayed or.

原句中'adjective' 'easy'用错，应使用副词'easily'，'delighted'用词错误，应为'delayed'。

× When small problems happened in the past. However, now I try to control my emotions and. Stay calm. Speak.

✓ When small problems happened in the past, however, now I try to control my emotions, stay calm, and speak.

原句断句不当，导致语义不连贯，应合并为完整句子，且'and speak'应与前文并列。