Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答语法错误较多，表达不够连贯，且有词汇错误。建议练习完整句子表达，注意主谓一致和正确使用介词，同时避免重复和断句错误。

例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I always listen carefully to my friends and try to understand their feelings.

提案: 回答中存在语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免重复，并且使句子结构完整。

例: I feel impatient when the internet is very slow because it prevents me from searching for information or sending messages to my family and friends.

提案: 回答语法混乱，表达不清楚，缺乏连贯性。建议先明确主题句，再用具体细节支持，使用连接词使句子流畅。

例: It depends on the task. If it helps me earn money or benefits the environment, I feel interested and patient. Otherwise, I tend to feel impatient.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和词汇使用不当，句子不完整。建议注意时态一致，正确使用名词和动词，保持句子完整。

例: Yes, my job requires me to be a patient person because I am a social worker, and I need to spend a long time listening to my patients.

提案: 回答表达混乱，语法错误多，词汇使用不当。建议练习表达比较和原因的句型，使用正确的形容词和副词。

例: I don't think I am more patient now than when I was a child because I used to be very impatient and hot-tempered.

× I will consider that I am patient person because I always.

✓ I consider that I am a patient person because I always listen to my friends.

这里不需要使用将来时态的助动词“will”，而是应该用一般现在时“consider”，因为这是表达习惯或事实。同时，缺少冠词“a”，应为“a patient person”。

× Or will listen about my friends.

✓ I listen to my friends.

动词“listen”后面应接介词“to”，而不是“about”。

× Ford and their feeling.

✓ for their feelings.

“feeling”应为复数形式“feelings”，表示多种感受。

× when their Internet is very slow and I can search anything or anything, even I can send a message to my family or friend that I will feel very annoying.

✓ when the Internet is very slow and I cannot search for anything, or even send a message to my family or friends, I feel very annoyed.

“their Internet”应为“the Internet”，因为指的是公共网络。动词“can”用错，应为“cannot”表示否定。短语“search anything”应为“search for anything”。“friend”应为复数“friends”。“feel very annoying”应为“feel very annoyed”，因为“annoying”是形容事物，“annoyed”形容人的感受。

× Is depends on what The thing is, if it can earn money or it is earth friend that I feel very interested that I will feel. OK, but it other I will feel impatient.

✓ It depends on what the thing is. If it can earn money or it is earth-friendly, I feel very interested and I will feel okay, but otherwise I will feel impatient.

句子结构混乱，缺少主语“it”，大小写错误，“earth friend”应为“earth-friendly”，连接词使用不当，需拆分为多个句子。

× Yes, my job required me to be a patient people because I am a social worker.

✓ Yes, my job requires me to be a patient person because I am a social worker.

“job”是现在时态，动词应为“requires”。“people”是复数，需改为单数“person”。

× So you need to earn take along time to listen to your. Patient.

✓ So you need to take a long time to listen to your patients.

“earn take along time”应为“take a long time”，且“patient”应为复数“patients”。

× I think not really, because when I was a child I often feel an impatient because maybe I'm very I often very hott.

✓ I think not really, because when I was a child I often felt impatient because maybe I was very hot-tempered.

时态错误，过去时应使用“felt”。“an impatient”错误，形容词“impatient”不加冠词。表达“hot”应为“hot-tempered”表示脾气急躁。