Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，语法和表达存在较多错误，建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用简单明了的语言表达耐心与否的原因。

例: Yes, I am generally a patient person, especially when I am with my family. However, I sometimes find it hard to be patient when I am distracted by many things while working on my own tasks.

提案: 回答内容不够具体，表达不流畅，建议用完整句子说明具体原因，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I feel impatient when I watch long videos about professional topics because they can be boring and hard to follow.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，建议用完整句子表达感受，并用连接词使内容连贯。

例: It depends on the activity. For example, when I do a puzzle for a long time, I feel calm and interested. After finishing it, I feel very satisfied with myself.

提案: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达混乱，建议简洁明了地说明工作是否需要耐心，并用简单句子表达原因。

例: I don't think my job requires much patience. It depends more on inspiration, and when I have good ideas, I write them down immediately on my phone.

提案: 回答表达不清，逻辑混乱，建议直接比较现在和小时候的耐心程度，并说明原因。

例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned to manage my emotions better and social media has less impact on me.

× Well, I said his depends on those object for my parents are families, I always be patient but.

✓ Well, I said it depends on those objects; for my parents and family, I am always patient.

这里's his'应为'it'，'object'应为复数'objects'，因为指多个对象。主语和谓语需保持一致。

× I always be patient but.

✓ I am always patient, but.

'always'表示习惯性动作，谓语动词应使用一般现在时态，故用'am'而非'be'。

× For myself or my own tasks. You know, there are so many distractions. So I'm difficult to.

✓ For myself or my own tasks, you know, there are so many distractions, so I find it difficult.

句子结构不完整，缺少谓语动词，需补充完整表达。

× Oh, for example when I watch a long video about Knowledge Ersar.

✓ Oh, for example, when I watch a long video about Knowledge Eraser.

'Ersar'应为'Eraser'，是拼写错误，影响理解。

× Some professional. Items. I will feel. Impatient because it's boring.

✓ Some professional items make me feel impatient because they're boring.

句子断裂，缺少连贯性，需合并并调整词序使表达清晰。

× Well, I think it's really depends on the situation.

✓ Well, I think it really depends on the situation.

'depends'的主语是'it'，单数，谓语用第三人称单数形式'depends'，但前面多了'is'，应去掉'is'。

× Well, I'm doing something it along time such as. Puzzle I will feel Kim and the interesting, and when I accomplish the edge, I will feel satisfied with myself.

✓ Well, when I'm doing something for a long time, such as a puzzle, I will feel calm and interested, and when I accomplish it, I will feel satisfied with myself.

'it along time'应为'for a long time'，'Kim'应为'calm'，'the interesting'应为'interested'，'accomplish the edge'应为'accomplish it'。

× Oh well, I I don't think so. Uh, I think my job. Is depends on inspirations parked instantly and while I have some good ideas I will write down on the phone, are not. So.

✓ Oh well, I don't think so. Uh, I think my job depends on inspiration coming instantly, and when I have some good ideas, I will write them down on the phone.

'Is depends'应为'depends'，'inspirations parked instantly'表达不清，改为'inspiration coming instantly'，句子结构需调整使其通顺。

× Oh, actually I think I'm more patient. Inanimate ride because.

✓ Oh, actually I think I'm more patient now because.

'Inanimate ride'无意义，应为'now'，保持时态一致。

× In God's time, I. I don't need to think about various things and social media is a little. Uh, impact on my life.

✓ In God's time, I didn't need to think about various things, and social media had little impact on my life.

时态应为过去时，'is a little impact'应为'had little impact'，表达过去情况。