Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Perbaiki penggunaan tata bahasa dan ejaan, serta hindari kalimat yang terlalu panjang dan berbelit. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih sederhana dan jelas untuk menjawab langsung pertanyaan. Misalnya, gunakan kata 'new' bukan 'knew', dan hindari frasa yang tidak jelas seperti 'cost first'.

例: I am generally patient, especially with children because they need time to learn new things at their own pace. However, I get impatient with people who are unpunctual since it disrupts my schedule.

提案: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat agar lebih natural dan efektif. Hindari kalimat yang terputus dan gunakan linking words untuk menghubungkan ide. Contohnya, gunakan 'because' untuk menjelaskan alasan dan hindari kesalahan seperti 'are usually get'.

例: I usually feel impatient when people are unpunctual because it wastes my time and disrupts my daily routine. For example, if someone arrives late to a meeting, it causes delays and makes me feel frustrated.

提案: Perbaiki kesalahan tata bahasa dan ejaan, serta buat kalimat lebih koheren dan lengkap. Gunakan linking words untuk menghubungkan ide dan hindari kalimat yang terputus. Misalnya, gunakan 'I usually feel relaxed and comfortable' dan hindari kata yang tidak jelas seperti 'comfort rible'.

例: It depends on what I have to do and who I am with. If I am doing something I enjoy, like watching movies or spending time with my best friends, I usually feel relaxed and comfortable, even if it takes a long time.

提案: Jawaban sudah cukup baik, namun perbaiki penggunaan kata 'quiet' yang seharusnya 'quite'. Selain itu, tambahkan sedikit variasi kosakata untuk membuat jawaban lebih menarik dan alami.

例: Yes, definitely. My job demands a great deal of patience because I often deal with difficult people, some of whom can be quite arrogant or uncooperative. For instance, I have to remain calm and listen attentively to their concerns to resolve conflicts effectively.

提案: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan lengkapi kalimat yang terputus. Gunakan kalimat yang lengkap dan jelas untuk menjawab pertanyaan. Misalnya, gunakan 'before reacting' untuk melengkapi kalimat terakhir.

例: Yes, I am definitely more patient now than when I was a child. This is because I have become more emotionally stable and better at handling challenges without getting upset. For instance, in difficult situations at work or in my personal life, I try to stay calm and think carefully before reacting.

× they need time to learn and understand knew things at their own pace

✓ they need time to learn and understand new things at their own pace

The word 'knew' is the past tense of 'know', but here the adjective 'new' is needed to describe 'things'. The error is using a past tense verb instead of an adjective. Replace 'knew' with 'new' to correct the sentence.

× it can disturb my schedule and cost first

✓ it can disturb my schedule and cost me first

The phrase 'cost first' is incorrect and unclear. It seems the student intended to say it causes a loss or cost to themselves. Adding 'me' clarifies the object of 'cost'. The error is omitting the object pronoun after 'cost'.

× are usually get impatient when people are unpunctual because it waste my time and disturbs my daily routine

✓ I usually get impatient when people are unpunctual because it wastes my time and disturbs my daily routine

The subject 'I' requires the verb 'get' without 'are'. Also, 'it' is singular, so the verb should be 'wastes' not 'waste'. The errors are incorrect subject-verb agreement and incorrect subject usage. Correcting the subject and verb forms resolves the issue.

× For instance if someone arrives late to meeting

✓ For instance, if someone arrives late to a meeting

The sentence lacks a comma after 'For instance' and the article 'a' before 'meeting'. The error is missing punctuation and article, which affects sentence clarity and correctness.

× It not only causes delays, but also make me feel quite firstly that

✓ It not only causes delays, but also makes me feel quite frustrated

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'It'. The phrase 'quite firstly that' is incorrect and unclear; replacing it with 'quite frustrated' makes the sentence meaningful. The errors are subject-verb agreement and unclear phrase usage.

× If I'm doing something I enjoy, like watching movies or spending time with my best friends are usually feel relaxed and comfort rible

✓ If I'm doing something I enjoy, like watching movies or spending time with my best friends, I usually feel relaxed and comfortable

The phrase 'are usually feel' is incorrect; it should be 'I usually feel' to match the subject and verb agreement. Also, 'comfort rible' is a misspelling of 'comfortable'. The errors are subject-verb agreement and spelling.

× Even if the. It takes a long time

✓ Even if it takes a long time

The sentence is fragmented with an unnecessary period and 'the'. Removing the period and 'the' corrects the sentence structure.

× some of whom can be quiet, arrogant or uncooperative

✓ some of whom can be quite arrogant or uncooperative

The word 'quiet' is likely a misspelling of 'quite' which is an adverb modifying 'arrogant'. 'Quiet' is an adjective meaning silent, which does not fit here. The error is incorrect word choice.

× I need to stay calm and listen carefully to their concern to resolve conflicts effectively

✓ I need to stay calm and listen carefully to their concerns to resolve conflicts effectively

The noun 'concern' should be plural 'concerns' to match the context of multiple issues. The error is incorrect singular/plural noun usage.

× Yes, definitely more patient now than when I was a child

✓ Yes, I am definitely more patient now than when I was a child

The sentence lacks the subject 'I am' which is necessary for a complete sentence. The error is sentence without a verb and subject.

× in difficult situation at work or in my personal life, I try to stay calm and think carefully before the

✓ in difficult situations at work or in my personal life, I try to stay calm and think carefully before acting

The noun 'situation' should be plural 'situations' to match the general context. Also, the sentence ends abruptly; adding 'acting' completes the thought. The errors are singular/plural noun usage and incomplete sentence.