Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear and complete sentence directly answering the question, and avoid incomplete thoughts. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, explain why you consider yourself patient and give a specific example.

例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I always wait for others, whether they are late or not. For instance, I make sure to keep my promises and respect agreed times, which shows my patience.

提案: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to use correct verb tenses and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Be specific about what makes you impatient.

例: I feel impatient when people are late because they do not respect the agreed time. This is frustrating, especially since I always try to keep my promises on time.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete sentences. Try to express your feelings clearly and use complete sentences. Use linking words to explain why you feel that way and give specific reasons.

例: I feel impatient when I have to do something for a long time because it can be boring and tiring. For example, waiting for a long time without any activity makes me restless.

提案: Your answer has good content but needs clearer sentence structure and grammar. Try to connect your ideas smoothly using linking words. Be specific about why patience is needed in your job.

例: Absolutely yes, my job in the medical field requires a lot of patience because some patients have difficulty understanding instructions. Also, some patients feel entitled due to their job or status, which requires me to remain calm and patient.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Give specific examples of how you are more patient now.

例: Yes, I am more patient now because I have learned to distract myself while waiting. For example, I read books or watch series, which helps me focus on something else instead of feeling impatient.

× Yes, I believe I'm a patient person because I. Always wait on someone. Weather there late or not we're over. I always stick to the promise time. And. I always make sure that I.

✓ Yes, I believe I'm a patient person because I always wait for someone, whether they're late or not. I always stick to the promised time, and I always make sure of that.

The original sentences are fragmented and contain punctuation errors, making them incomplete and unclear. Combining the fragments into complete sentences improves clarity and grammatical correctness. Also, 'wait on someone' should be 'wait for someone', and 'weather' is a misspelling of 'whether'. 'There' should be 'they're' (they are). 'Promise time' should be 'promised time'. Suggestion: Use complete sentences with correct conjunctions and prepositions to express ideas clearly.

× Yes, I believe I'm a patient person because I. Always wait on someone. Weather there late or not we're over.

✓ Yes, I believe I'm a patient person because I always wait for someone, whether they're late or not.

The phrase 'wait on someone' is incorrect in this context; the correct preposition is 'wait for someone'. Also, 'weather' is a misspelling of 'whether', and 'there' should be 'they're' (they are). Correct preposition and spelling are essential for clear communication.

× Weather there late or not we're over.

✓ Whether they're late or not, we're over.

'There' is incorrectly used instead of the contraction 'they're' (they are). Using the correct pronoun form is important to convey the intended meaning.

× I always stick to the promise time.

✓ I always stick to the promised time.

'Promise' is a noun; the correct adjective form here is 'promised' to describe the time. Using the correct adjective form clarifies the meaning.

× And. I always make sure that I.

✓ And I always make sure of that.

The original sentence is incomplete and fragmented. Completing the sentence with 'make sure of that' provides clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Even though that I always wait for a late person. It also makes me impatient because they don't know how to respect the agreed time and they wasn't even they were able to keep their promises. Like I did with them.

✓ Even though I always wait for a late person, it also makes me impatient because they don't know how to respect the agreed time and they weren't even able to keep their promises like I did with them.

The original sentences are fragmented and contain subject-verb agreement errors ('they wasn't' should be 'they weren't'). Also, 'Even though that' is incorrect; 'Even though' suffices. Combining the sentences improves flow and clarity.

× they wasn't even they were able to keep their promises.

✓ they weren't even able to keep their promises.

The subject 'they' requires the plural verb 'weren't' instead of 'wasn't'. Correct subject-verb agreement is essential for grammatical accuracy.

× Waiting is at that same pass and it can. Make you feel impatient because of. Having to do a lot for a long time. Is. Instead use and tiring.

✓ Waiting is the same pace and it can make you feel impatient because having to do a lot for a long time is instead useless and tiring.

The original sentences are fragmented and contain unclear phrases ('at that same pass', 'instead use'). The corrected sentence combines the ideas into a coherent statement and replaces unclear words with appropriate ones ('useless').

× Is. Instead use and tiring.

✓ is instead useless and tiring.

The phrase 'instead use' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'useless'. Using the correct adjective improves clarity.

× Absolutely yes, because. Working in the medical field needs a lot of patience because of a certain patients with the understand instructions. Also patients who. Feel entitled to their. Job or. Status in life.

✓ Absolutely yes, because working in the medical field needs a lot of patience due to certain patients having difficulty understanding instructions, and also patients who feel entitled to their job or status in life.

The original sentences are fragmented and contain grammatical errors ('a certain patients', 'with the understand instructions'). Combining the sentences and correcting grammar improves clarity and correctness.

× because of a certain patients with the understand instructions.

✓ due to certain patients having difficulty understanding instructions.

'A certain patients' is incorrect because 'patients' is plural and 'a' is singular. Also, 'with the understand instructions' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'having difficulty understanding instructions'. Using correct quantifiers and verb forms is important.

× Yes, because nowadays I have ways to. Take all my mind in waiting and do something else instead, like doing some of my hobbies.

✓ Yes, because nowadays I have ways to take my mind off waiting and do something else instead, like doing some of my hobbies.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect phrases ('Take all my mind in waiting'). The corrected sentence uses the idiomatic expression 'take my mind off waiting' and combines the fragments into a complete sentence.

× Take all my mind in waiting

✓ take my mind off waiting

The phrase 'take all my mind in waiting' is incorrect. The correct idiomatic expression is 'take my mind off waiting', where 'off' is the correct preposition to indicate distraction from something.

× There are also times when I need to do some tasks it instead on focusing.

✓ There are also times when I need to do some tasks instead of focusing.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect word order ('do some tasks it instead on focusing'). The corrected sentence uses the correct phrase 'instead of focusing' and proper sentence structure.