Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Perbaiki penggunaan grammar dan buat jawaban lebih alami dengan menghindari kesalahan seperti 'eat snack' menjadi 'eat snacks'. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih jelas dan terstruktur.

例: I usually eat snacks during lunchtime or when I'm lying in bed watching TV.

提案: Jawaban kurang jelas dan tidak terstruktur dengan baik. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih teratur dan jelaskan alasan mengapa snack bisa sehat atau tidak, serta hindari kalimat yang tidak relevan.

例: In my opinion, eating snacks can be healthy if I choose nutritious options. For example, fruits or nuts provide important nutrients that our body needs.

提案: Jawaban mengandung kesalahan grammar dan kalimat yang tidak jelas seperti 'take care of my wife'. Perbaiki kalimat dan buat jawaban lebih spesifik dan logis.

例: From what I remember, I didn't often eat snacks when I was young because my mom told me to take care of my health and avoid eating too many snacks.

提案: Jawaban kurang alami dan ada kesalahan grammar seperti 'a delicious snacks'. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami dan perbaiki grammar.

例: I like to eat chocolate, toast, and sandwiches. These snacks are delicious and satisfy my hunger between meals.

× I often eat snack when it's lunch time or when I'm in my bed while watching TV.

✓ I often eat snacks when it's lunchtime or when I'm in my bed while watching TV.

The word 'snack' should be plural 'snacks' because it refers to general instances of eating small amounts of food, not a single snack. Also, 'lunch time' is commonly written as one word 'lunchtime'.

× In my opinion, yeah, it's it is healthy for me too.

✓ In my opinion, yeah, it is healthy for me too.

The phrase 'it's it is' is redundant. Only one form of the verb 'to be' should be used here to maintain correct modal verb usage and sentence clarity.

× It's nice. It's like an important nutrition in our life.

✓ It's nice. It's like important nutrition in our life.

'Nutrition' is an uncountable noun and should not be preceded by the indefinite article 'an'. Removing 'an' corrects the quantifier usage.

× So I got to eat it.

✓ So I have to eat it.

The phrase 'got to' is informal and incorrect in this context. 'Have to' is the correct modal verb phrase to express obligation.

× I maybe one birthday, one time.

✓ Maybe once a year on my birthday.

The original sentence is unclear and incorrectly structured. 'Once a year on my birthday' correctly expresses the intended frequency and occasion.

× From what I remember, no I don't often eat snack when I was little because my mom keep telling me to take care of my wife so I had to reduce it next so often.

✓ From what I remember, no, I didn't often eat snacks when I was little because my mom kept telling me to take care of my wife, so I had to reduce it and not eat so often.

The sentence has multiple tense errors: 'don't' should be past tense 'didn't' to match 'was little'; 'snack' should be plural 'snacks'; 'keep' should be past tense 'kept'; 'next so often' is unclear and corrected to 'and not eat so often' for clarity.

× Those three are a delicious snacks.

✓ Those three are delicious snacks.

'Snacks' is plural, so the article 'a' should be removed to correct the singular/plural agreement.