Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm cho ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các từ liên kết để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I usually eat snacks in the late afternoon, around 4 or 5 PM, when I start feeling hungry. For example, I often have some fruit or nuts to keep my energy up while I work or study. This helps me avoid feeling too hungry before dinner.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều từ không phù hợp hoặc sai ngữ cảnh. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh để truyền đạt ý kiến rõ ràng.

例: I believe eating snacks can be healthy if you choose them wisely. For example, eating fruits or nuts provides essential nutrients and energy between meals.

提案: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm cho ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, đúng ngữ pháp và tránh lỗi chính tả để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn.

例: I used to eat snacks quite often when I was young. For example, I often had a few cookies after school because they were convenient and tasty. So, snacks were a regular part of my daily routine.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt, rõ ràng và có nội dung phù hợp. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể thêm một vài chi tiết hoặc từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên và mạch lạc hơn.

例: I enjoy eating fruits, especially apples and bananas. They are not only delicious but also healthy because they provide natural sugars and vitamins that give me energy throughout the day.

× I usually eat snack in the late afternoon around 4:00 or 5:00 PM when I start feeling a bit hungry.

✓ I usually eat snacks in the late afternoon around 4:00 or 5:00 PM when I start feeling a bit hungry.

The noun 'snack' should be plural 'snacks' because it refers to a general habit of eating more than one snack or snack items over time. In English, when talking about habitual actions involving countable nouns, the plural form is used.

× Between lunch or dinner, for example, I often have some food on earth to keep my energy level up.

✓ Between lunch and dinner, for example, I often have some food to keep my energy level up.

The correct preposition to connect two items in this context is 'and' not 'or'. Also, 'on earth' is incorrect and unnecessary here; it should be removed to make the sentence clear and natural.

× This help me avoid over.

✓ This helps me avoid overeating.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'This'. Also, the phrase 'avoid over' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'avoid overeating' to convey the intended meaning.

× Since I believe eating snack can be healthy if Joshua wisely for exam or opens for fruit owners interests of jewelry are free.

✓ Since I believe eating snacks can be healthy if chosen wisely, for example, fruits or nuts. Snacks provide essential nutrition and energy between meals.

The original sentence is unclear and contains unrelated words. 'Snack' should be plural 'snacks' when speaking generally. The sentence is corrected to a clear, grammatically correct statement that fits the context.

× This. I used to eat snack quite often I when was young.

✓ I used to eat snacks quite often when I was young.

The noun 'snack' should be plural 'snacks' to indicate habitual action. Also, the sentence had extra words and punctuation that were removed for clarity and correctness.

× So my king were a regular part of daily routine.

✓ So my snacks were a regular part of my daily routine.

The word 'king' is incorrect and likely a typo for 'snacks'. Also, 'daily routine' needs the possessive pronoun 'my' to be correct. The sentence structure is corrected accordingly.