Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中时态使用不一致，且表达不够自然。建议注意时态的一致性，并且避免重复表达。可以用更连贯的句子来表达你吃零食的时间和原因。

例: I usually eat snacks when I am doing my homework or feeling nervous. Also, when I am busy, I like to have some snacks to help me relax.

提案: 回答中表达不够连贯，且有重复和语法错误。建议用更完整和连贯的句子表达观点，并且避免重复。

例: No, I don't think eating snacks is healthy because they can harm our health. However, I find it hard to resist eating them sometimes.

提案: 回答中有些表达不够自然，比如“I'd love to”用法不当。建议用更准确的表达，并且用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young. For example, when I was six, my aunt often took me to eat snacks and spicy food, which is why I love spicy food now.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议用完整句子表达喜欢的零食种类和原因，并避免语法错误。

例: I like to eat sweet snacks because they make me feel happy and relaxed. Although they are not very healthy, I still enjoy them.

× I often eat snacks when I do my homework or when I was nervous.

✓ I often eat snacks when I do my homework or when I am nervous.

这里的时间状语是现在时态，表示经常发生的事情，所以“was nervous”应改为“am nervous”，保持时态一致。

× When I was busy, I will eat some snacks to relax myself.

✓ When I am busy, I will eat some snacks to relax myself.

句子中“when I was busy”与“will eat”时态不匹配，应改为“when I am busy”，表示将来或习惯性动作。

× No, I wouldn't say so. Absolutely. Only it's bad for our health, but I can't, I can't control myself to to avoid them.

✓ No, I wouldn't say so. Absolutely. It's bad for our health, but I can't control myself to avoid them.

句中“Only”用法不当，应去掉；“I can't, I can't”重复，应删去一个；“to to”重复，应删去一个。

× Yes, I'd love to. When I was six years old, my aunt often took me to eat some snacks or spicy food.

✓ Yes, I loved to. When I was six years old, my aunt often took me to eat some snacks or spicy food.

回答过去习惯时，动词应使用过去时态，“I'd love to”应改为“I loved to”。

× I like to eat. Sweet snacks because sweet food always make me feel happy and slow.

✓ I like to eat sweet snacks because sweet food always makes me feel happy and slow.

“make”应改为“makes”，主谓一致；“slow”用词不当，可能想表达“relaxed”或“calm”，但根据原句保持不变。