Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but can be more natural and concise. Use correct prepositions and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I usually have snacks twice a day: once in the afternoon and once in the evening."

例: I usually have snacks twice a day: once in the afternoon and once in the evening.

提案: Try to use clearer sentence structure and correct tense. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, "Yes, I think eating snacks is healthy because after a heavy meal, sometimes we need something light to eat."

例: Yes, I think eating snacks is healthy because after a heavy meal, sometimes we need something light to eat.

提案: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to answer directly and clearly with correct tense and structure. For example, "Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young and I still eat them daily because I like to have something when I feel hungry."

例: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young and I still eat them daily because I like to have something when I feel hungry.

提案: Good attempt but try to be more specific and use better linking words. For example, "I like many kinds of snacks, mostly fast food, but also light snacks like desserts and dry nuts such as peanuts and cashews."

例: I like many kinds of snacks, mostly fast food, but also light snacks like desserts and dry nuts such as peanuts and cashews.

× Usually I take my snacks twice in a day.

✓ Usually I take my snacks twice a day.

The phrase 'in a day' is incorrect here; the correct expression is 'a day' to indicate frequency. This is a common singular/plural usage issue in English.

× First time I take it in mid daytime and secondly I take it on evening.

✓ The first time I take it is in the middle of the day, and secondly I take it in the evening.

The prepositions 'in mid daytime' and 'on evening' are incorrect. The correct prepositions are 'in the middle of the day' and 'in the evening'. This is a preposition usage error.

× Yes, I think it is healthy for me to eat snacks because when we ate a heavy breakfast or lunch or dinner after, sometimes we need something light food.

✓ Yes, I think it is healthy for me to eat snacks because when we eat a heavy breakfast, lunch, or dinner, sometimes we need something light to eat afterwards.

The sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'ate' when referring to a general habit, which requires present tense 'eat'. Also, 'something light food' is incorrect; it should be 'something light to eat'. This is a past tense and sentence structure issue.

× Yes, I all finish next when I was young and still I taking it in a day.

✓ Yes, I used to finish all my snacks when I was young and I still take them during the day.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'all finish next' is unclear and incorrect; 'still I taking it' is grammatically wrong. The correction addresses singular/plural forms and verb tense. This is a singular/plural and verb tense issue.

× I love it and I like to take my snacks because when I feel hungry I have it.

✓ I love it and I like to eat my snacks because when I feel hungry, I have them.

The phrase 'take my snacks' is less natural than 'eat my snacks'. Also, 'have it' should be 'have them' to agree with the plural 'snacks'. This is a present tense and singular/plural issue.

× I prefer many kinds of snacks and mostly I prefer fast food and some light thing like some dessert or some dry foods, dry nuts like peanuts, cashew nuts, et cetera.

✓ I prefer many kinds of snacks, mostly fast food and some light things like desserts or dry foods, such as dry nuts like peanuts, cashew nuts, etc.

The sentence has singular/plural inconsistencies: 'some light thing' should be 'some light things'; 'some dessert' should be 'desserts'; 'dry foods' is acceptable but 'dry nuts' is better specified. This is a singular/plural and article usage issue.