Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如时态和冠词使用不当，且表达不够自然。建议使用正确的时态和冠词，并使句子更流畅自然。

例: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon while watching TV because snacks are the perfect companion for it.

提案: 回答内容逻辑混乱，表达的观点不明确且有矛盾。建议明确表达观点，并用连词连接句子，使回答更连贯。

例: I think eating snacks is not very healthy because they often contain a lot of sugar and salt; therefore, I try to limit how often I eat them.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如冠词和单复数形式使用错误。建议注意语法正确性，并丰富细节使回答更具体。

例: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was a child. My parents usually bought me cookies and chips because I found them very delicious back then.

提案: 回答中出现了词汇错误（hockey应为honey或其他），语法错误和表达不清晰。建议使用正确词汇，注意语法，并清晰表达喜好。

例: I really like honey because it smells good and tastes sweet. I also enjoy chocolate cookies and strawberry cookies.

× I usually eat snacks in afternoon when I watching TV.

✓ I usually eat snacks in the afternoon when I am watching TV.

句中缺少be动词，watching前应有am，表示现在进行时态。'in afternoon'应为'in the afternoon'，需要加定冠词。

× I usually eat snacks in afternoon when I watching TV.

✓ I usually eat snacks in the afternoon when I am watching TV.

'afternoon'前应加定冠词'the'，表示特指时间段。

× Snacks are the best partner of TV.

✓ Snacks are the best partner of the TV.

'TV'前应加定冠词'the'，表示特指电视。

× Of course, not eating snacks is usually unhealthy because they often contain a lot of sugar and salt.

✓ Of course, not eating snacks is usually unhealthy because they often contain a lot of sugar and salt.

此句无明显情态动词错误，保持原句。

× However, I'm trying to increase the times that I eat snacks.

✓ However, I'm trying to increase the number of times that I eat snacks.

'times'前应使用'number of'来修饰次数，'increase the times'表达不准确。

× When I was a children, my parents always bought some snacks for me like cookies and some chips because it's so delicious for me at that time.

✓ When I was a child, my parents always bought some snacks for me like cookies and some chips because they were so delicious for me at that time.

'children'是复数，前面用'a'表示单数，应改为'child'。'it's'指代不明确，应改为'they were'指代复数的零食。

× When I was a children, my parents always bought some snacks for me like cookies and some chips because it's so delicious for me at that time.

✓ When I was a child, my parents always bought some snacks for me like cookies and some chips because they were so delicious for me at that time.

'it's'指代不明确，应使用复数代词'they'指代复数的零食。

× I love hockey so much because it smell good and it's tasty, right?

✓ I love cookies so much because they smell good and they're tasty, right?

原句中'hockey'应为'cookies'，且'it smell'应为'they smell'，主谓一致错误。

× I love chocolate cookies and the strawberries cookies.

✓ I love chocolate cookies and strawberry cookies.

'strawberries cookies'中'adjective'应为单数形式'strawberry'修饰复数名词'cookies'。