Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to give a direct answer to the question by specifying a time or situation when you usually eat snacks. This will make your response more natural and effective. Avoid saying 'I don't know' as it does not address the question.

例: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon, around 4 pm, when I feel a bit hungry between lunch and dinner.

提案: Make sure your answer is relevant to the question. Here, the student’s answer is unclear and unrelated. Instead, express your opinion about the healthiness of eating snacks and provide reasons or examples to support your view.

例: I think eating snacks can be healthy if you choose nutritious options like fruits or nuts, but eating too many sugary snacks is not good for health.

提案: Provide a clear and direct answer to the question by recalling your past habits. Adding some details will enrich your response and make it more engaging.

例: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young, especially after school. I liked having biscuits or fruit as a treat.

提案: Your answer is relevant but quite brief. Try to expand your response by explaining why you like crisps or mentioning other snacks you enjoy. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

例: I like eating crisps because they are crunchy and salty. However, I also enjoy healthier snacks like fresh fruit or yogurt.

× Hen Jing Kong is very healthy.

✓ Eating snacks is very healthy.

The original sentence uses 'Hen Jing Kong', which appears to be a mispronunciation or incorrect term instead of referring to 'eating snacks'. The pronoun or noun phrase does not correctly represent the subject. The correction replaces it with the appropriate subject 'Eating snacks' to make the sentence meaningful and grammatically correct.