Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如“I'm not usually eat the net”应为“I don't usually eat snacks”。建议注意动词时态和句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。

例: I don't usually eat snacks, but when I feel upset, I like to eat some chocolate because it gives me energy and makes me feel better.

提案: 回答中表达不够准确，建议使用更自然的表达方式，如“eating snacks is not good for health”。另外，建议避免重复“more and more times”，可以说“more often”。

例: Unfortunately, I don't think eating snacks is good for our health. Therefore, if someone eats snacks, I would recommend brushing their teeth more often.

提案: 回答中有多处语法和词汇错误，如“Where was the yarns?”应为“When I was young”，动词时态和单复数也需注意。建议多练习基本句型，确保表达清晰。

例: When I was young, I didn't eat many snacks because my grandmother prohibited me from eating too many. She told me that eating at night is bad for my teeth, and I should exercise more.

提案: 回答中表达不够自然，如“don't eat some snacks”应为“don't usually eat snacks”。建议使用更地道的表达，并注意句子简洁。

例: Well, I don't usually eat snacks, but if I had to recommend one, I would suggest chocolate because it's sweet and can help you recharge your energy.

× Well to be honest I'm not usually eat the net, but if I feel upset I will eat some chocolate because in my view chocolate can give me some energy when I feel frustrated.

✓ Well to be honest I don't usually eat them, but if I feel upset I will eat some chocolate because in my view chocolate can give me some energy when I feel frustrated.

这里的错误是动词时态和用法问题，'I'm not usually eat'是不正确的表达，应该用一般现在时的否定形式'don't usually eat'。另外，'the net'应为复数形式'them'，指代零食。建议使用正确的时态和代词。

× Unfortunately not, I don't think eating some snack is good for our health, so if someone's eating snacks I would recommend they should brush their teeth more and more times.

✓ Unfortunately not, I don't think eating snacks is good for our health, so if someone is eating snacks I would recommend they should brush their teeth more often.

'some snack'用法不当，应该用复数形式'snacks'表示零食的泛指。'more and more times'表达不自然，建议用'more often'表示频率增加。

× Where was the yarns? I didn't eat some snacks because my grandmother prohibit me to eat more snack. Her tell me eating at night is back for my teeth. I should do more exercise.

✓ Where were the years? I didn't eat snacks because my grandmother prohibited me from eating more snacks. She told me eating at night is bad for my teeth. I should do more exercise.

这里有多个过去时错误：'prohibit'应为过去式'prohibited'，'Her tell'应为过去式'She told'。'some snacks'改为复数'snacks'更合适。'back'应为'bad'。此外，'prohibit me to eat'应改为'prohibited me from eating'，符合固定搭配。

× Where was the yarns? I didn't eat some snacks because my grandmother prohibit me to eat more snack. Her tell me eating at night is back for my teeth. I should do more exercise.

✓ Where were the years? I didn't eat snacks because my grandmother prohibited me from eating more snacks. She told me eating at night is bad for my teeth. I should do more exercise.

'some snacks'和'more snack'用法不当，应该用复数形式'snacks'表示零食的泛指和数量。

× Well, you know I don't eat some snacks but if you ask me to recommend some snacks with you, I would recommend you some chocolate because I think chocolate is so sweet it can help you recharge your energy.

✓ Well, you know I don't eat snacks but if you ask me to recommend some snacks to you, I would recommend some chocolate because I think chocolate is so sweet it can help you recharge your energy.

'don't eat some snacks'用法不当，应该用'don't eat snacks'表示泛指。'recommend some snacks with you'表达错误，应该用'recommend some snacks to you'。