Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat natural but has some redundancy and unclear parts. Try to be more concise and avoid filler words like 'like' and unclear phrases such as 'they ALS they are also really'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon or evening when I have free time. My favorite snacks are chocolates and biscuits because they are tasty and easy to eat, especially while watching TV.

提案: Your answer covers the main idea but ends abruptly and has some grammatical errors. Try to complete your sentences fully and use linking words like 'however' or 'on the other hand' to contrast ideas. Also, avoid repeating 'healthy' too often by using synonyms.

例: Not all snacks are healthy. For example, fruits and salads are good choices because they provide nutrients. However, biscuits, chips, and chocolates are less healthy and should be eaten in moderation.

提案: Your answer is short and has some grammatical mistakes. Use past tense consistently and add linking words to compare past and present habits clearly. Also, try to expand your answer with more details.

例: Yes, I used to eat snacks more often when I was young. For example, I ate chocolates every day, which is more frequent than I do now.

提案: Your answer is understandable but has some unclear phrases and repetition. Avoid filler words like 'or what' and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, try to be more specific and concise.

例: I usually like to eat chocolate chips and biscuits because they are easy to eat while studying or watching TV.

× Like whenever you are watching TV you can just bite on them and they ALS they are also really.

✓ Like whenever you are watching TV, you can just bite on them and they are also really good.

The sentence has an incomplete phrase 'they ALS they are also really.' which seems to be a typographical error or incorrect conjunction use. The corrected sentence completes the thought properly. Always ensure conjunctions connect clauses clearly and avoid incomplete phrases.

× So not every snacks are.

✓ So not every snack is.

The phrase 'not every snacks are' is incorrect because 'every' is followed by a singular noun and singular verb. 'Snack' should be singular and verb 'is' agrees with it. Use singular noun after 'every' and singular verb accordingly.

× Yes, when I was young I love to eat snacks more than now.

✓ Yes, when I was young I loved to eat snacks more than now.

The sentence mixes past time reference 'when I was young' with present tense verb 'love'. The verb should be in past tense 'loved' to match the time frame. Maintain tense consistency to avoid confusion.

× I used to eat chocolates everyday compared to now.

✓ I used to eat chocolates every day compared to now.

'Everyday' is an adjective meaning common or normal, but here the adverbial phrase 'every day' (two words) meaning 'each day' is correct. Use 'every day' when referring to frequency.