Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
When do you usually eat snacks now?
受験者
Oh ideally it's not because I dislike sweet and snack, but after a long day from work, from study, I often eat snacks.
試験官
Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?
受験者
No, I I think that snacks is not is not good for our health because it has too many oil and sugar.
試験官
Did you often eat snacks when you were young?
受験者
Maybe I didn't eat snacks when I was a child, but I love eating candy because I can eat candy for a long time. It's so good point for me.
試験官
What snacks do you like to eat?
受験者
My favorite snacks is candy because it's so sweet and I can enjoy it for a long time and that's why candy was my favorite treat.
評価
総合
Part 1
When do you usually eat snacks now?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答が少し不自然で、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。例えば、「I dislike sweet and snack」という表現は文脈に合っていません。より自然で効果的な答え方として、直接質問に答えた後に理由を述べる構成にすると良いでしょう。
例: I usually eat snacks in the evening after a long day of work or study because it helps me relax and recharge.
Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?
スコア: 65.0提案: 文法の誤り（例えば、'snacks is'ではなく'snacks are'）や繰り返しが見られます。また、理由は具体的ですが、より自然な表現と接続詞を使うと良いでしょう。
例: No, I don't think snacks are healthy because they usually contain a lot of oil and sugar, which can be bad for our health.
Did you often eat snacks when you were young?
スコア: 55.0提案: 答えが少し混乱しており、過去の習慣と現在の好みが混ざっています。過去形を使い、質問に直接答えた後に理由を述べると良いでしょう。また、'It's so good point for me'は不自然なので、より適切な表現を使いましょう。
例: I didn't eat many snacks when I was a child, but I loved candy because it lasted a long time and tasted sweet.
What snacks do you like to eat?
スコア: 60.0提案: 文法の誤り（'snacks is'ではなく'snacks are'）や時制の混乱があります。答えは少し冗長なので、簡潔で明確な表現にすると良いでしょう。
例: My favorite snack is candy because it is sweet and I can enjoy it slowly for a long time.
文法
× No, I I think that snacks is not is not good for our health because it has too many oil and sugar.
✓ No, I think that snacks are not good for our health because they have too much oil and sugar.
'Snacks' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. 'Too many' is used with countable nouns, but 'oil' and 'sugar' are uncountable, so 'too much' is correct here.
× Maybe I didn't eat snacks when I was a child, but I love eating candy because I can eat candy for a long time.
✓ Maybe I didn't eat snacks when I was a child, but I loved eating candy because I could eat candy for a long time.
The sentence refers to past habits, so past tense verbs 'loved' and 'could' should be used. Also, 'candy' is uncountable and singular, so it is correct here.
× My favorite snacks is candy because it's so sweet and I can enjoy it for a long time and that's why candy was my favorite treat.
✓ My favorite snack is candy because it's so sweet and I can enjoy it for a long time, and that's why candy was my favorite treat.
'Snacks' is plural, but here it refers to one favorite item, so 'snack' (singular) is correct. The verb 'is' agrees with the singular subject 'snack'.
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