Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了时间和原因，但语法和表达不够自然，且缺少连接词。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon because I often feel hungry then, and I need some calories and sweetness to keep me energized.

提案: 回答中有重复和不完整的句子，表达不够流畅。建议避免重复，使用完整句子，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: No, I don't think eating snacks is healthy because they usually contain extra calories, sugar, and fat, which can be harmful to our health.

提案: 回答内容较好，但语法有误，且表达不够自然。建议使用正确的时态和更自然的表达方式。

例: Yes, definitely. I often ate many snacks like candy, cakes, and cookies when I was a child because they were so delicious and sweet that I couldn't resist them.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，使用正确的语法，并清楚表达喜好和原因。

例: I like to eat various snacks, especially cakes, because they are delicious, sweet, and soft. I also enjoy sharing them with others.

× I always eat snacks afternoon

✓ I always eat snacks in the afternoon

这里缺少介词'in'，表示在某个时间段内发生的动作，正确表达应该是'in the afternoon'。

× It is harmful for your health and.

✓ It is harmful to your health.

句子末尾多余的'and'导致句子结构不完整，应去掉。并且习惯用法是'harmful to'而不是'harmful for'。

× Maybe 'cause it was so delicious and sweet that I can't avoid to eat it.

✓ Maybe because it was so delicious and sweet that I couldn't avoid eating it.

句子中时态不一致，前半句是过去时，后半句应保持过去时态。'can't'应改为'couldn't'，'avoid to eat'应改为'avoid eating'。

× I'd like to eat various of snacks

✓ I'd like to eat various snacks

'various'后面不需要加'of'，直接修饰复数名词。

× maybe because it was so delicious and sweet and taste soft so that I I'd like to take them and share.

✓ maybe because they were so delicious and sweet and tasted soft so that I'd like to take them and share.

描述过去的情况，动词应使用过去时态，'taste'应改为'tasted'，'was'改为'were'以匹配复数名词。