Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is too short and lacks detail. Try to give a full sentence and add some reasons or examples to make your answer more natural and effective.

例: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon because I feel hungry between lunch and dinner, so a small snack helps me stay energized.

提案: Your answer is very brief and does not explain your opinion. You should provide reasons or examples to support your answer and use linking words to make it coherent.

例: Yes, I think eating healthy snacks like fruits or nuts can be good for me because they provide essential nutrients and keep me full.

提案: Your answer is too short and lacks detail. Try to give a complete sentence and add some supporting details to enrich your response.

例: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young, especially sweets and chips, because they were my favourite treats after school.

提案: Your answer is very brief and does not provide any explanation or details. Try to give a full sentence and explain why you like that snack or describe it.

例: I like to eat candy because it is sweet and delicious, and it helps me feel happy when I need a quick energy boost.

× Afternoon.

✓ In the afternoon.

The student's answer 'Afternoon.' is a fragment and lacks a verb or preposition to form a complete sentence. Adding 'In the' makes it a proper phrase indicating the time when snacks are eaten, fitting the question's context.

× Yes.

✓ Yes, I think it is healthy for me to eat snacks.

The answer 'Yes.' is too brief and does not fully respond to the question. Providing a complete sentence clarifies the student's opinion and improves communication.

× Yes.

✓ Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young.

The short answer 'Yes.' lacks context and does not match the past tense of the question. A full sentence with past tense verb 'ate' is necessary to properly answer the question.

× Candy.

✓ I like to eat candy.

The answer 'Candy.' is a fragment and does not form a complete sentence. Adding 'I like to eat' makes it a full sentence that directly answers the question.