Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer repeats the examiner's question, which is unnecessary. Also, 'snack' should be plural as 'snacks'. Try to give a more natural and concise response, and avoid redundancy. For example, start directly with your answer and provide a reason or specific time.

例: I usually eat snacks when I feel hungry, especially late at night around 3:00 AM.

提案: Your answer is clear but very brief. To improve, add a reason or explanation to support your opinion, using linking words to make your response more coherent.

例: No, I don't think eating snacks is healthy because they often contain a lot of sugar and fat, which can be bad for my health.

提案: Your answer is direct but could be improved by adding more specific details or examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas and make your answer more engaging.

例: Yes, I used to eat a lot of snacks when I was younger, especially sweets like candy and cookies after school.

提案: Your answer has a small grammatical error: 'is' should be 'are' because you mention multiple snacks. Also, try to add reasons or descriptions to enrich your answer and use linking words for coherence.

例: Some of my favorite snacks are Lay's chips and chocolate because they taste delicious and are easy to find.

× When do you usually eat snack now?

✓ When do you usually eat snacks now?

The noun 'snack' should be plural 'snacks' because the question refers to eating snacks in general, which is a countable plural noun in this context.

× I usually eat snack when I'm hungry or at 3:00 AM.

✓ I usually eat snacks when I'm hungry or at 3:00 AM.

The noun 'snack' should be plural 'snacks' because it refers to an unspecified quantity of snacks eaten habitually, which requires the plural form.

× Some of my favorite snacks to eat is Lays chips and chocolate.

✓ Some of my favorite snacks to eat are Lays chips and chocolate.

The subject 'Some of my favorite snacks' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.