Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免语法错误，如“a habit of me”应改为“a habit of mine”，并且可以更自然地表达。建议简洁明了地回答问题，同时用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I usually eat snacks in the evening, especially after dinner, because I like to relax while watching movies or reading novels.

提案: 回答中存在语法和表达错误，如“help with myself”不合适，应改为“control myself”。建议用更准确的词汇表达观点，并避免重复和不连贯。

例: Honestly, I don't think eating snacks is very healthy, but I find it hard to resist because they are delicious and sweet, like chips and sugary treats. However, they do help improve my mood.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“would to buy”应为“would buy”，句子结构不完整。建议使用正确的时态和句型，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, when I was a little girl, I would buy snacks after school almost every day as a small reward for finishing a long day of classes. My parents didn't stop me as long as I ate proper meals.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如“something sugaring things”应为“something sugary”。建议使用准确的词汇和简洁的句子表达喜好，并避免重复。

例: Honestly, the snacks I like aren't very healthy because I especially enjoy sugary foods like chips, ice cream, and cookies.

× I enjoy watching movies and reading novels. It is a habit of me to relax with some snacks.

✓ I enjoy watching movies and reading novels. It is a habit of mine to relax with some snacks.

“a habit of me”是不正确的表达，应该用“a habit of mine”表示“我的习惯”，这是所有格的用法。

× Honestly I don't think it is very healthy habit but I can help with myself because it is very delicious and sweet like chips and sugaring things.

✓ Honestly, I don't think it is a very healthy habit but I can't help myself because it is very delicious and sweet like chips and sugary things.

“can help with myself”用法错误，正确表达是“can't help myself”，表示“忍不住自己”。另外，“sugaring things”应为“sugary things”，形容词形式。

× Yes, when I was a little girl I remember that I would to buy the snack after school almost everyday and it just like a little reward for finish a long day of classes.

✓ Yes, when I was a little girl I remember that I would buy snacks after school almost every day and it was just like a little reward for finishing a long day of classes.

“would to buy”中“to”多余，应去掉；“the snack”应为复数“snacks”；“everyday”应为副词短语“every day”；“it just like”缺少动词，应为“it was just like”；“for finish”应为“for finishing”，动名词形式。

× My parents not stop me as long as I ate proper meals.

✓ My parents did not stop me as long as I ate proper meals.

句子描述过去情况，谓语应使用过去时，“not stop”应改为“did not stop”。

× Honestly, like the snacks I eat is not very good for health because I especially like something sugaring things, you know, like chips and ice cream and cookies.

✓ Honestly, the snacks I eat are not very good for health because I especially like sugary things, you know, like chips, ice cream, and cookies.

“the snacks I eat is”主谓不一致，应为“are”；“something sugaring things”表达不正确，应为“sugary things”，形容词形式。