Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免语法错误，并且表达更自然流畅。可以用更连贯的句子表达原因，避免重复。

例: I usually eat snacks once or twice a week because they are delicious and hard to resist.

提案: 回答内容较好，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更连贯，同时用更准确的词汇表达健康影响。

例: Absolutely not. I don't think eating snacks is healthy because they often contain a lot of fat, which can lead to weight gain.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免错误，并且内容要连贯。

例: Yes, I used to eat more snacks when I was young, sometimes even skipping dinner, which was not good for my health. Now, I try to eat snacks less often.

提案: 回答中有拼写错误和语法错误，建议使用正确词汇并且句子结构更完整。

例: I like to eat potato chips because they are tasty and tempting, which makes me want to eat more and more.

× Nowadays I eat snacks once or twice a week because snack is delicious so it's hard to resist.

✓ Nowadays I eat snacks once or twice a week because snacks are delicious so they're hard to resist.

这里'snack'应该用复数形式'snacks'，因为指的是零食的种类或数量。主语和谓语也要保持一致，使用复数形式。

× Absolutely not. I don't think eating snacks is healthy because the snack contains a lot of fat that can lead to your weight gain.

✓ Absolutely not. I don't think eating snacks is healthy because snacks contain a lot of fat that can lead to weight gain.

这里的'the snack'应改为复数形式'snacks'，因为指的是零食的总体。动词也要用复数形式'contain'。此外，'your weight gain'中'your'不必要，直接用'weight gain'更自然。

× Of course yes, when I was young people I ate more snacks even I skipped dinner.

✓ Of course yes, when I was young I ate more snacks and even skipped dinner.

'when I was young people'中'people'多余，应去掉。'even I skipped dinner'应改为'and even skipped dinner'，使句子结构更连贯。

× So this is not good for my healthy.

✓ So this is not good for my health.

'healthy'是形容词，表示健康的；这里需要名词'health'表示健康状况。

× So nowadays I eat next leg.

✓ So nowadays I eat next leg.

该句语义不清，'next leg'可能是拼写错误或表达错误，建议确认原意后重写。

× I like to eat potato chips because it's tasty and tempty.

✓ I like to eat potato chips because they're tasty and tempting.

'it's'应改为复数形式'they're'对应'potato chips'。'tempty'拼写错误，应为'tempting'，表示诱人的。

× It attracts me eat more and more.

✓ It attracts me to eat more and more.

动词'attract'后应接不定式'to eat'，表示吸引我去做某事。