Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答没有回答考官的问题，而是重复了问题本身。建议直接回答问题，例如说明你通常什么时候吃零食，并简要说明原因。

例: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon because I feel hungry between lunch and dinner.

提案: 你的回答没有回答考官的问题，而是重复了问题本身。建议直接表达你对吃零食是否健康的看法，并给出理由。

例: I don't think eating snacks is very healthy because many snacks contain a lot of sugar and fat.

提案: 你的回答有语法错误，时态使用不当。建议使用过去时态描述过去的习惯，并且可以补充更多细节。

例: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young, but sometimes I had stomach aches because I ate too much.

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢的零食种类，但有些表达不够自然，例如“like to eat like”。建议简化表达并补充原因或喜好。

例: I like to eat popcorn, potato chips, and cheesecake. Among them, my favorite is cola because it tastes refreshing.

× Yeah, I often eat snacks when I was young and I usually have stomach ache.

✓ Yeah, I often ate snacks when I was young and I usually had stomach ache.

句子中描述过去的习惯动作，应该使用过去时态。'eat'应改为'ate'，'have'应改为'had'，以保持时态一致。

× I like to eat like popcorn, potato chips and cheesecake.

✓ I like to eat popcorn, potato chips and cheesecake.

'like'在此处重复使用，造成语法错误，应去掉第一个'like'，直接列举喜欢的食物。