Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较自然且内容相关，但句子结构重复，且缺少连接词使表达更流畅。建议使用连接词如“because”或“so”来连接句子，并避免重复使用“usually”。

例: I usually eat snacks when I feel stressed or upset because chocolate helps improve my mood and makes me feel relaxed.

提案: 回答内容明确，但句子不够连贯，存在语法错误（"as it as"），且细节描述不够具体。建议合并句子并使用连接词，避免语法错误。

例: I think it depends on the type of snacks; for example, fruits and nuts are healthy because they contain essential nutrients.

提案: 回答内容丰富且结构合理，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更流畅。建议在句子间加入连接词如“and”或“so”。

例: Yes, when I was a kid, I used to eat snacks very frequently, and I often enjoyed chocolate and chips because they tasted delicious and had different flavors. Sometimes, I would have them after school as a treat to relax.

提案: 回答不完整，句子未结束，缺少细节和连接词。建议完成句子，增加具体原因，并使用连接词使表达完整。

例: Now I prefer to eat snacks such as fruit and nuts, which are low in fat and salt because I want to keep fit and maintain a healthy lifestyle.

× Now I prefer to eat snacks such as fruit and nuts which have low fat and low salt because I want to keep fit and.

✓ Now I prefer to eat snacks such as fruit and nuts which have low fat and low salt because I want to keep fit.

句子末尾的“and”是多余的，导致句子不完整。应去掉“and”使句子完整通顺。