Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时表达较为自然，但句子较长且有些重复，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I usually eat snacks while watching TV or movies. However, I try to limit my intake because I feel embarrassed having to brush my teeth every time after snacking.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇，且表达略显简单。建议避免重复，使用更丰富的词汇，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I don't think eating snacks is very healthy because most of them, such as chips and soda, are junk food. Nevertheless, it's quite difficult to resist them.

提案: 回答内容具体且有情感，但句子结构稍显复杂且连接词使用不当。建议调整句子结构，合理使用连接词，使表达更自然。

例: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young because my family members, like my parents and grandma, gave me snacks to show their love. Although eating many snacks wasn't healthy, it made me happy.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，且句子断裂。建议完整表达观点，避免语法错误，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

例: I like sweet snacks such as chocolate and jelly. I'm also a big fan of chips because I enjoy their crunchy texture.

× I like snacks that taste sweet like such as chocolate Jelly.

✓ I like snacks that taste sweet, such as chocolate and jelly.

句中“like such as”重复使用，且“chocolate Jelly”应分开为“chocolate and jelly”，表示巧克力和果冻两种甜味零食。应去掉多余的词语，保持表达简洁。

× I'm also. A big fan of chips because I like how crunchy it is.

✓ I'm also a big fan of chips because I like how crunchy they are.

chips是复数，指薯片，代词应使用复数they，谓语动词也应用复数形式are，保持主谓一致。