Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构较为混乱，建议简化句子并注意时态和主谓一致，同时避免重复表达。

例: I usually eat snacks when I watch TV or play games with my friends. Sometimes, I also eat snacks at night if I feel hungry.

提案: 表达中存在语法错误和用词不当，建议使用更准确的表达方式，并且可以增加连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Eating snacks is definitely not healthy, but sometimes I just want to enjoy tasty food, so I can't stop eating.

提案: 回答简洁但有重复词汇，建议注意避免重复，同时可以适当扩展内容使回答更丰富。

例: Not really. When I was young, my parents didn't allow me to eat snacks, so I rarely had them.

提案: 开头句子不相关且多余，建议直接回答问题，并且可以增加更多细节描述以丰富内容。

例: I enjoy eating a variety of snacks. My favorite snack is tomato chips because they are very crispy and have a unique flavor that I love.

× I usually eat snacks when I'm watching TV or play some games with my friends or sometimes in the night I feel hungry I will eat some snacks.

✓ I usually eat snacks when I'm watching TV or playing some games with my friends, or sometimes at night when I feel hungry, I will eat some snacks.

在并列动词短语中，动词形式应保持一致。这里“watching TV”和“play some games”应都用动名词形式，保持平行结构。建议将“play”改为“playing”。另外，“in the night”应改为“at night”，更符合习惯用法。

× It is definitely not healthy, but sometimes you just want to taste some good taste food and I can't stop to eat.

✓ It is definitely not healthy, but sometimes you just want to taste some good-tasting food and I can't stop eating.

“can't stop to eat”是不正确的表达，正确用法是“can't stop doing something”，即动词-ing形式。这里应将“to eat”改为“eating”。另外，“good taste food”应改为“good-tasting food”，用形容词形式修饰名词。

× Not really. When I when I was young, my parents didn't permit me to eat snacks.

✓ Not really. When I was young, my parents didn't allow me to eat snacks.

“permit”虽然语法上没错，但在口语中更常用“allow”表示允许。这里建议用“allow”更自然。重复的“when I”应去掉一个。

× Do you like to eat? I enjoy eating a variety of snacks. My favorite snack is the tomato chips. Its texture is very crispy and I love it.

✓ I enjoy eating a variety of snacks. My favorite snack is tomato chips. Their texture is very crispy and I love them.

“Do you like to eat?”这句话与上下文不符，应删除。名词“tomato chips”是复数，指代时应使用复数代词“their”和“them”，而不是“its”和“it”。