Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
When do you usually eat snacks now?
受験者
I usually eat snacks when I'm watching movies or chatting with my friend because it make the experience more enjoyable. For example, I like to have popcorn when or some not while watching films and having snacks during conversations to let me feel more comfortable.
試験官
Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?
受験者
To be honest, I think most snacks are not very healthy because they are usually too sweet or fried, which can be bad for our health. However, some snacks like fruits or nuts are quite healthy and provide important nutrients.
試験官
Did you often eat snacks when you were young?
受験者
No because my parents don't allow me to eat too much snacks so I often so I ate the snacks maybe twice a week.
試験官
What snacks do you like to eat?
受験者
I like Eat crisps. I like Eat. It tastes crunchy and some flavours are spicy. It's really delicious.
評価
総合
Part 1
When do you usually eat snacks now?
スコア: 65.0提案: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不够自然，比如“it make”应为“it makes”，句子结构也有些混乱。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用连接词使表达更连贯。
例: I usually eat snacks when I'm watching movies or chatting with my friends because it makes the experience more enjoyable. For example, I like to have popcorn while watching films, and having snacks during conversations helps me feel more comfortable.
Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?
スコア: 85.0提案: 你的回答内容较好，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更流畅，同时丰富词汇表达。
例: To be honest, I think most snacks are unhealthy because they are often too sweet or fried, which can harm our health. However, some snacks, such as fruits and nuts, are quite healthy since they provide essential nutrients.
Did you often eat snacks when you were young?
スコア: 50.0提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，句子结构混乱。建议使用完整句子，注意时态和语法，表达更清晰。
例: No, I didn't eat snacks often when I was young because my parents didn't allow me to eat too many. I probably ate snacks only twice a week.
What snacks do you like to eat?
スコア: 40.0提案: 回答重复且语法错误较多，表达不连贯。建议简洁明了地描述喜欢的零食，并用连接词丰富句子。
例: I like eating crisps because they are crunchy and come in various flavors, some of which are spicy. They taste really delicious.
文法
× I usually eat snacks when I'm watching movies or chatting with my friend because it make the experience more enjoyable.
✓ I usually eat snacks when I'm watching movies or chatting with my friend because it makes the experience more enjoyable.
主语是单数it，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式makes，而不是make。
× I like to have popcorn when or some not while watching films and having snacks during conversations to let me feel more comfortable.
✓ I like to have popcorn or something else while watching films and having snacks during conversations to make me feel more comfortable.
原句中'when or some not'表达不清，应该用'or something else'表示'或者其他东西'，并且'let me feel'应改为'make me feel'更自然。
× No because my parents don't allow me to eat too much snacks so I often so I ate the snacks maybe twice a week.
✓ No, because my parents didn't allow me to eat too many snacks, so I ate snacks maybe twice a week.
描述过去的事情，动词时态应为过去时，'don't allow'应改为'didn't allow'，'too much snacks'应改为'too many snacks'，'so I often so I ate'语序混乱，应简化为'so I ate'。
× I like Eat crisps.
✓ I like eating crisps.
动词like后面接动名词形式更自然，'like Eat'不符合语法，应改为'like eating'。
× I like Eat.
✓ I like eating.
同上，动词like后应接动名词形式，'like Eat'不正确。
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