Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“Are they think snacks are unhealthy”应为“They think snacks are unhealthy”。建议注意语法准确性，避免重复表达，并使用更自然的连接词。

例: I usually eat fewer snacks on weekends because my parents think they are unhealthy. However, when they are not at home, I sometimes eat snacks secretly so I can enjoy my favorite treats without worrying about their disapproval.

提案: 回答中存在词汇错误，如“chemical damage on the snails”应为“chemical damage in snacks”。建议使用准确词汇，表达更清晰，并增加逻辑连接词使回答更连贯。

例: Yes, I do. I believe eating snacks can keep my mind healthy, making me happier and more relaxed. Although some snacks contain chemicals that may be harmful, I think the benefits outweigh the harm.

提案: 回答结构清晰，内容具体，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。建议适当丰富细节，提升表达自然度。

例: No, I didn't. My parents were very strict about my eating habits and didn't allow me to have unhealthy food. Besides, I didn't have much pocket money, so I couldn't afford to buy snacks even if I wanted to.

提案: 回答表达基本清晰，但“can't afford myself from eating”表达不自然，应改为“can't stop myself from eating”。建议注意固定搭配的使用，提升语言自然度。

例: I don't usually eat snacks, but I especially enjoy potato chips. My favorite flavor is tomato because it tastes delicious and a bit salty. Sometimes, I can't stop myself from eating at least three bags in one sitting, which is definitely too much for me.

× Are they think snacks are unhealthy.

✓ They think snacks are unhealthy.

句子中 'Are they think' 是错误的第三人称单数用法，正确的表达应该是 'They think'，因为主语是复数 'they'，动词不需要加 'are'。

× Sometimes I can't afford myself from eating at least three bags in one setting, which is definitely too much for me.

✓ Sometimes I can't stop myself from eating at least three bags in one sitting, which is definitely too much for me.

短语 'afford myself from' 用法错误，正确表达是 'stop myself from'，表示阻止自己做某事。另外，'setting' 应为 'sitting'，表示一次坐下来吃的时间。