Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较自然且内容相关，但句子稍长且缺少连接词，使表达略显简单。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，同时避免重复表达。

例: I usually eat snacks when I feel a bit hungry, and I also treat myself to some snacks every Friday evening as a reward after a busy week.

提案: 回答直接且内容具体，但可以增加连接词和更多细节来丰富答案，使表达更自然流畅。

例: I think eating snacks can be healthy for me because I choose nutritious options like yogurt, nuts, and fruits instead of sugary or fried snacks.

提案: 回答内容具体且结构清晰，但可以使用连接词使句子更连贯，同时避免重复词汇。

例: Yes, I really enjoyed eating snacks when I was young, especially during primary school, because I would go to nearby shops every day after class to buy some.

提案: 回答内容具体且有理由支持，但“nutrients snacks”表达不准确，建议使用更地道的词汇，并适当使用连接词。

例: I usually prefer nutritious snacks such as yogurt, nuts, and fresh fruits rather than sugary or fried foods because they provide essential vitamins and energy.

× Well, I usually prefer nutrients snacks like yogurt, nuts and fresh foods instead of sugary or fried foods because they provide essential vitamins and energy.

✓ Well, I usually prefer nutritious snacks like yogurt, nuts and fresh foods instead of sugary or fried foods because they provide essential vitamins and energy.

这里'nutrients snacks'是不正确的搭配，'nutrients'是名词，不能直接修饰名词'snacks'。正确的形容词形式是'nutritious'，表示有营养的。建议使用'nutritious snacks'来表达有营养的零食。