Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“in the midnight”应为“at midnight”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复。

例: I usually eat snacks at midnight because I often stay up late playing computer games, which makes me feel hungry.

提案: 回答内容较好，但存在语法错误，如“my stomach always feel”应为“my stomach always feels”。建议注意主谓一致，并尝试使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I think eating snacks at midnight is unhealthy because it makes it hard for me to fall asleep. For instance, my stomach often feels uncomfortable and digestion takes longer after I eat late at night.

提案: 回答中时态使用不准确，如“keep”应为“kept”，且表达略显重复。建议注意时态一致，并使用更自然的表达。

例: No, I didn't eat snacks often when I was young. My parents kept a close eye on me and didn't allow me to eat snacks alone because they thought they were unhealthy. Instead, they usually gave me fruit to eat.

提案: 回答中出现了错误词汇（如“duck”应为“dark”），重复表达（“It gives it gives”），时态不一致。建议注意词汇准确性，避免重复，并保持时态一致。

例: I prefer chocolate because it tastes delicious and comes in many types, such as dark, milk, and white chocolate. I can never say no to it because it gives me a great sense of satisfaction and provides energy to overcome challenges.

× Maybe in the midnight.

✓ Maybe at midnight.

这里的介词使用错误，应该用介词'at'表示具体时间点，'in the midnight'是不正确的表达。

× After a long time playing with computer games, I always search some snacks to eat at home.

✓ After a long time playing computer games, I always search for some snacks to eat at home.

动词短语中不需要介词'with'，应直接用'playing computer games'。另外，'search'后面需要加介词'for'表示寻找。

× my stomach always feel uncomfortable

✓ my stomach always feels uncomfortable

主语是单数'stomach'，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'feels'。

× They keep a strict eye on me and avoid me to eat snacks by myself because they think they're unhealthy.

✓ They kept a strict eye on me and prevented me from eating snacks by myself because they thought they were unhealthy.

描述过去的动作，动词应使用过去时态。'keep'改为'kept'，'avoid me to eat'表达错误，应改为'prevented me from eating'。

× I prefer chocolate because it tastes so delicious and it has so many types such as duck, milk and white.

✓ I prefer chocolate because it tastes so delicious and it has so many types such as dark, milk and white.

'duck'是错误的单词，应为'dark'表示黑巧克力。

× It gives it gives me a great sense of satisfaction and gave me a lot of energy to overcome the difficulty.

✓ It gives me a great sense of satisfaction and gives me a lot of energy to overcome difficulties.

时态不一致，前半句用现在时，后半句应保持一致。'gave'改为'gives'。另外，'the difficulty'应改为复数形式'difficulties'更自然。