Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答不够连贯，表达不清晰，且有语法错误。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复和语法错误。

例: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon because I feel hungry between meals. However, I try not to eat snacks too often to maintain my health.

提案: 回答较为清晰，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅，同时丰富细节。

例: I think it depends on the type of snacks. For example, nuts are nutritious and healthy, but fried foods are usually unhealthy because they contain a lot of oil and calories.

提案: 回答结构合理，但可以增加连接词和更多细节，使表达更自然。

例: Yes, I used to eat snacks frequently when I was a child. For instance, I enjoyed chocolate chips and fried chicken because they tasted delicious and were easy to find.

提案: 回答内容较好，但句子未完整，且缺少连接词。建议完整表达并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I prefer snacks that are low in fat and free of salt or oil because I want to maintain a healthy diet. For example, I often choose fresh fruits or unsalted nuts as my snacks.

× Eat more snacks is very important for my body and health so I I eat snacks.

✓ Eating more snacks is very important for my body and health, so I eat snacks.

这里“Eat more snacks”应使用动名词形式“Eating”作为主语，表示“吃更多零食”这件事。

× I think it depend on what kind of snacks it is.

✓ I think it depends on what kind of snacks it is.

动词depend需要第三人称单数形式depends，因为主语是it。

× For example the nuts are good nutrition for our body.

✓ For example, nuts are good nutrition for our body.

nuts前不需要加定冠词the，因为这里泛指坚果。

× I prefer to eat snacks that are low in fat and without salt or oil because I want to keep a healthy diet.

✓ I prefer to eat snacks that are low in fat and without salt or oil because I want to maintain a healthy diet.

短语“keep a healthy diet”不太自然，通常用“maintain a healthy diet”表示保持健康饮食。

× For example, I often choose fresh fruits or nuts without heavy salt or.

✓ For example, I often choose fresh fruits or nuts without heavy salt or oil.

句子末尾缺少“oil”，导致句子不完整。