Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且使用正确的介词和时态，使表达更自然。

例: I usually eat snacks after lunch or dinner because my professor told me that it's better to have snacks after meals.

提案: 回答中断句不完整，表达不连贯。建议使用完整句子，避免口头语，增加连接词使内容更连贯。

例: I think it depends on the type of snacks. For example, yogurt or fruits are healthy options, but fried snacks like chips or fried chicken are not good for health.

提案: 回答较为完整，但存在口头语和重复。建议减少填充词，使用更简洁的表达，并适当使用连接词。

例: Not really. When I was a child, I usually ate three meals a day. Since my father and grandmother cooked well, I ate enough during meals and didn't feel like having snacks.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够连贯。建议使用完整句子，避免重复，并且用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I like sweet snacks such as cakes, cookies, and candies. However, I have bad teeth, so I know eating too many sweets is not good for my health.

× snacks is much better to eat to have to eat after meal is better for.

✓ snacks are much better to eat after a meal.

这里'snacks'是复数形式，谓语动词应使用复数形式'are'，而不是单数'is'。此外，句子结构混乱，需简化为'after a meal'。

× If I have something fried like chips or chickens and you know, and.

✓ If I have something fried like chips or chicken, you know.

'chickens'通常指多只活鸡，作为食物时应使用不可数名词'chicken'。

× I usually have, uh, three meals and that's all because my father and my grandma are good at cooking, so I eat a lot, uh, when I have a, a meal, so I don't have enough space for snacks.

✓ I usually have three meals and that's all because my father and my grandma are good at cooking, so I eat a lot when I have a meal, so I don't have enough space for snacks.

句中多余的'uh'和重复的'a'影响表达，应去除以使句子更流畅。

× I think I'm have a bad tooth.

✓ I think I have a bad tooth.

'I'm have'是不正确的结构，应使用'I have'。

× I have a really bad tooth so but I know it's not really good for us to have too much sweet.

✓ I have a really bad tooth, but I know it's not really good for us to have too much sweets.

'sweet'作为不可数名词时指甜味，表示甜食应使用复数'sweets'。