Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应直接回应问题，说明通常什么时候吃零食，并避免重复和语法错误。可以简洁地列举零食种类，并说明吃零食的时间。

例: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon, such as chocolate, cookies, and candies. I try not to eat too many because it can be unhealthy.

提案: 回答应更清晰表达观点，避免语法错误和不连贯。可以先明确表示零食不健康，然后解释原因，并用连接词使句子连贯。

例: No, I don't think eating too many snacks is healthy because it can cause weight gain. However, sometimes snacks help me relax and feel better.

提案: 回答应避免重复和语法错误，结构清晰。可以先说明小时候经常吃零食，然后举例并说明零食带来的感受。

例: When I was a child, my parents often bought me snacks like chocolates and cookies. Eating them made me happy and relaxed.

提案: 回答时注意语法正确，避免重复。可以先说明喜欢的零食，然后具体描述不同种类和原因。

例: My favorite snack is chocolate because it comes in various shapes and flavors, such as milk, dark, and white chocolate.

× I enjoy eating snacks such as dessert and sweetie snacks, chocolate and candies, cookies.

✓ I enjoy eating snacks such as desserts and sweet snacks, chocolates and candies, cookies.

名词复数形式使用错误。'dessert'应为复数'desserts'，'sweetie snacks'应为'sweet snacks'，'chocolate'应为复数'chocolates'，以匹配列举多个种类的零食。

× But however I eat more snacks and it is bad for our health.

✓ However, I eat more snacks, and it is bad for our health.

'But'和'however'不能同时使用，二者都是转折连词，重复使用造成语法错误。应选择其中一个，并注意逗号的使用。

× you maybe uh, increase the weight or it is less than snacks.

✓ you may increase your weight or it is less than snacks.

情态动词'maybe'用法错误，应使用'may'表示可能性。

× My favorite snacks is chocolate because because chocolates has a various shapes and various and different delicious such as milk chocolates and black chocolate and white chocolate.

✓ My favorite snack is chocolate because chocolates have various shapes and different delicious types such as milk chocolate, dark chocolate, and white chocolate.

'snacks'应为单数'snack'与谓语动词'is'一致；'chocolates'作为复数，谓语动词应为'have'；'a various shapes'结构错误，应去掉冠词'a'；'various and different delicious'表达不当，应改为'different delicious types'。