Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中时态使用不正确，应该用现在时态描述现在的习惯。此外，句子结构不够自然，表达重复。建议使用简单明了的句子，避免语法错误。

例: I usually eat snacks when I feel bored or when I am watching a film or TV.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议注意句子结构，使用连词使表达更连贯，同时具体说明为什么选择蔬菜类零食。

例: No, I don't think snacks are very healthy, but sometimes I choose vegetable-based snacks because they are less oily and better for my health.

提案: 时态使用错误较多，句子结构混乱，表达不够清晰。建议使用过去时态描述过去的习惯，简化句子并避免重复。

例: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was a child. I really liked potato chips and drinking cola because many children enjoyed them.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议使用更准确的表达，避免重复，并且用连词连接句子，使回答更流畅。

例: I really like potato chips because they are a perfect snack when watching films or TV. I also enjoy candies since many children like sweet foods such as cakes, candies, or bubble gum.

× I usually eat snacks when I was boring or I prefer eat snacks when I was watching a film or TV.

✓ I usually eat snacks when I am bored or I prefer to eat snacks when I am watching a film or TV.

这里的时间状语是现在时态，不能用过去时"was"，应该用现在时"am"。另外，"boring"是形容词，意思是令人感到无聊的，正确表达应该是"bored"，表示感到无聊的状态。动词"prefer"后面需要加不定式"to eat"。

× No, I think it snacks is not healthy, but sometimes I'll choose the snacks made by some vegetables.

✓ No, I think snacks are not healthy, but sometimes I'll choose snacks made from some vegetables.

"snacks"是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式"are"，而不是"is"。"it snacks"结构错误，应直接用复数名词"snacks"。另外，"made by some vegetables"应改为"made from some vegetables"，表示由蔬菜制成。

× I don't like it the oil snacks because that is not good for me.

✓ I don't like oily snacks because they are not good for me.

"oil snacks"表达不正确，应使用形容词"oily"修饰"snacks"。"it the oil snacks"结构错误，应直接说"oily snacks"。"that is"指代复数名词应改为"they are"。

× Yes, I usually eat snacks when I was a little child.

✓ Yes, I usually ate snacks when I was a little child.

描述过去习惯时，谓语动词应使用过去时态，"usually eat"应改为"usually ate"。

× I really like it's the potato chips and I also like to drink some cola when I was a little children because I think most of the children prefer to eat potato chips like the McDonald's.

✓ I really like potato chips and I also liked to drink some cola when I was a little child because I think most children prefer to eat potato chips like at McDonald's.

"it's the potato chips"结构错误，应直接说"potato chips"。"when I was a little children"中"children"是复数，主语是单数，应改为"child"。"like the McDonald's"应改为"like at McDonald's"。

× I really like potato chips and candies because potato chips it's a best friend when you are watching films or watch TV.

✓ I really like potato chips and candies because potato chips are a best friend when you are watching films or watching TV.

"potato chips"是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式"are"，而不是"it's"。"watch TV"前应加动名词"watching"以保持时态一致。

× And the candy, most children like the sweet food I think like cake, candies or some bubble gum.

✓ And candy, most children like sweet foods like cake, candies, or some bubble gum, I think.

"the candy"不需要定冠词，且"sweet food"应使用复数形式"sweet foods"。句子结构调整使表达更自然。