Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法错误较多，且表达不够自然。建议注意动词时态和单复数形式的正确使用，同时避免重复表达。可以用更连贯的句子表达时间和喜好。

例: I usually eat snacks only on weekends because I'm very busy from Monday to Friday. My favorite snack is spicy chips, which I find very tasty.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免语法错误，并且用连词使句子更连贯。

例: No, I think snacks are unhealthy for everyone. For example, candies and chocolates can cause weight gain and damage teeth, so eating too many snacks is not good for health.

提案: 时态使用不当，句子结构不完整。建议注意过去时态的正确使用，并且用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young. I found sweet snacks very delicious, but my mom told me not to eat too much, so I limited myself.

提案: 表达中存在语法错误和重复用词。建议使用更准确的形容词和句式，避免重复，并且使表达更自然。

例: I like several kinds of snacks, such as spicy chips, which I find very appetizing. However, I don't like sweet snacks because they are too sugary for me.

× I'm just eat snacks on the weekend and my favorite snacks is chips.

✓ I just eat snacks on the weekend and my favorite snack is chips.

snacks是复数，favorite后面应接单数名词snack，因为指的是最喜欢的一种零食。

× I'm just eat snacks on the weekend

✓ I just eat snacks on the weekend

这里的动词eat不应该用进行时态形式，正确用一般现在时。

× my favorite snacks is chips.

✓ my favorite snack is chips.

favorite后面应接单数名词，表示最喜欢的一种零食。

× It is little bit spicy and mouth watering.

✓ It is a little bit spicy and mouth-watering.

little bit前应加冠词a，mouth-watering作为形容词应连字符连接。

× No I think snacks is unhealthy for everybody.

✓ No, I think snacks are unhealthy for everybody.

snacks是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式are。

× For example candy and chocolate it can be fat and it will makes teeth broken.

✓ For example, candy and chocolate can make you fat and can cause tooth decay.

candy和chocolate是复数，谓语动词应用复数形式can make；makes应改为make；teeth broken表达不准确，改为tooth decay更自然。

× it will makes teeth broken.

✓ it will make teeth broken.

makes应改为make，主语it指代复数应改为they或改写句子。

× So icing the snacks is not healthy.

✓ So eating snacks is not healthy.

icing应为eating，拼写错误。

× Yeah I often eat snacks when I was young

✓ Yeah, I often ate snacks when I was young.

描述过去习惯应使用过去时ate。

× sweet snacks is very mouth watering and tasty

✓ sweet snacks are very mouth-watering and tasty

snacks是复数，谓语动词应用are。

× my mom told me don't eat more so I just eat it.

✓ my mom told me not to eat too much, so I just ate a little.

don't eat more表达不自然，改为not to eat too much；eat it不明确，改为ate a little更合适。

× I like to eat several snacks, for example chips.

✓ I like to eat several snacks, for example, chips.

句中缺少逗号，chips作为复数名词使用正确。

× The chips is little bit spicy and mouth watering

✓ The chips are a little bit spicy and mouth-watering

chips是复数，谓语动词应用are；a little bit前应加冠词a；mouth-watering作为形容词应连字符连接。

× I think sweet snacks is too sweet so I don't like it.

✓ I think sweet snacks are too sweet, so I don't like them.

snacks是复数，谓语动词应用are；代词it应改为them，指代复数名词snacks。