Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời trở nên tự nhiên và logic hơn.

例: I usually eat snacks on Saturdays and Sundays because I have more free time to relax and enjoy them.

提案: Bạn cần trả lời rõ ràng và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp. Hãy giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Actually, I don't think eating snacks is healthy because they can upset my stomach and cause weight gain.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích thêm chi tiết cụ thể.

例: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young because my parents usually gave me some after school.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy mô tả loại đồ ăn vặt bạn thích và lý do bạn thích nó một cách cụ thể.

例: I like to eat spicy snacks because they make me feel excited and enjoy the strong flavors.

× I usually eat snacking or satire Monday.

✓ I usually eat snacks on Saturday.

The verb 'eat' should be followed by a noun, not a verb in -ing form here. 'Snacking' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'snacks'. Also, 'satire Monday' seems to be a mishearing or typo; likely meant 'Saturday'. Use the preposition 'on' for days of the week.

× Saturday and Sunday because they are higher.

✓ Saturday and Sunday because they are holidays.

The word 'higher' is incorrect in this context; likely the intended word is 'holidays'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and unclear; it should specify why these days are special.

× I relaxed in I wanna eat up.

✓ I relax and want to eat then.

The sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'I wanna eat up' is informal and 'in' is misplaced. The corrected sentence clarifies the intended meaning with proper structure.

× Actually is no because each night is small make me your stomach an make me fat.

✓ Actually, no, because each night I eat a small amount, but it makes my stomach upset and makes me fat.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb in the first clause. 'Each night is small' is incorrect; it should specify what is small. Also, 'make me your stomach' is incorrect; likely intended 'makes my stomach upset'. The sentence needs proper subject-verb agreement and clearer expression.

× Yes, but when I was young I usually easting snake because my parents, my parents are usually give me snake because he had pick up there.

✓ Yes, but when I was young I usually ate snacks because my parents usually gave me snacks because they had picked them up there.

'Easting' is incorrect; the past tense 'ate' should be used. 'Snake' is a mishearing of 'snack'. 'Are usually give' should be 'usually gave' to match past tense. 'He had pick up there' is incorrect; 'they had picked them up there' is correct.

× I like Nike a spicy in hot spicy it make me a feeling enjoy.

✓ I like spicy snacks; the hot spiciness makes me feel enjoyment.

'Nike' is likely a mishearing or typo. 'In hot spicy' is incorrect preposition usage; 'hot spicy' should be an adjective phrase describing the snacks. 'It make me a feeling enjoy' is ungrammatical; correct form is 'it makes me feel enjoyment' or 'it makes me feel good'.