Part 1
試験官
When do you usually eat snacks now?
受験者
Actually, are you really eat next? When I watch movies, for example, I like to eat. Potato PO so I watching TV.
試験官
Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?
受験者
Uhm, I think it's not very healthy for me to eat snacks and we all know many snakes have some bad things in it. So uh, I suppose people do not eat more snacks.
試験官
Did you often eat snacks when you were young?
受験者
Yes, when I was a little girl, I like it. Snacks for example, I always. Spending my our money to buy some snacks and I always share with my friends to eat snacks.
試験官
What snacks do you like to eat?
受験者
I like potato chips best because I am very like potato made things and I think.
When do you usually eat snacks now?
スコア: 40.0提案: 你的回答不够连贯,语法和词汇使用有误,表达不清晰。建议练习简单句型,明确表达时间和场合,并使用正确的词汇。
例: I usually eat snacks when I watch movies at home. For example, I like to eat potato chips while watching TV.
Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?
スコア: 50.0提案: 回答中有语法错误和词汇错误(snakes应为snacks),表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇,避免重复,并用连接词使句子更流畅。
例: I think eating snacks is not very healthy because many snacks contain unhealthy ingredients. Therefore, people should avoid eating too many snacks.
Did you often eat snacks when you were young?
スコア: 45.0提案: 回答结构混乱,语法错误较多,表达不完整。建议先用主题句回答,再用具体细节支持,注意时态和句子完整性。
例: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young. For example, I used to spend my pocket money to buy snacks and share them with my friends.
What snacks do you like to eat?
スコア: 40.0提案: 回答不完整,语法错误,表达不清晰。建议完整表达喜欢的零食及原因,使用连贯句子。
例: I like potato chips the most because I enjoy foods made from potatoes. They taste crispy and delicious.