Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to form complete sentences and directly answer the question. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about the snacks and timing.

例: I usually eat snacks in the evening. I prefer snacks like chow mein, momos, and some spicy dishes because I enjoy flavorful food.

提案: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Try to express your opinion clearly with reasons. Use linking words to explain why snacks may or may not be healthy.

例: I think snacks are not always healthy because they often contain a lot of oil and sugar, which can be bad for health.

提案: Your answer has many grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to answer directly and provide specific examples of snacks you liked when young, using linking words to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young. I especially liked spicy snacks such as burgers, pizza, and chow mein because they tasted very good.

提案: Your answer is better but still has some errors and lacks detail. Try to use plural forms correctly and add reasons why you like these snacks, using linking words for coherence.

例: I like to eat burgers, pizza, chow mein, and momos. I enjoy these snacks because they are spicy and full of flavor.

× Is I usually eats next basically in the evening.

✓ I usually eat snacks basically in the evening.

The subject 'I' requires the base form of the verb 'eat' without 's'. 'Is' is incorrect here as it does not fit the sentence structure. The sentence also needed 'snacks' to clarify the object. So, 'I usually eat snacks basically in the evening.' is correct.

× I prefer snacks like. We chow Mein, momos and some spices next that I like.

✓ I prefer snacks like chow mein, momos, and some spicy snacks that I like.

The phrase 'We chow Mein' is incorrect; 'We' is unnecessary and 'chow Mein' should be lowercase unless a proper noun. 'Spices next' is incorrect; it should be 'spicy snacks'. Prepositions and word choice were incorrect, so the sentence was corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Basically, snacks are. Not always not eat healthy things because as its content.

✓ Basically, snacks are not always healthy to eat because of their content.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Snacks are.' is incomplete. 'Not always not eat healthy things' is incorrect and confusing. The corrected sentence uses proper structure and clarifies the meaning.

× Mini oil sometimes at sugar and menial unhealthier things on.

✓ They sometimes contain oil, sugar, and many unhealthy things.

The original sentence misuses prepositions 'at' and 'on' and has unclear words like 'mini' and 'menial'. The correction clarifies the meaning and uses correct prepositions.

× Yes I I eat lot of snakes or in my obiang but there's time I feel.

✓ Yes, I ate a lot of snacks when I was young, but sometimes I felt...

The verb 'eat' should be in past tense 'ate' to match the past time frame. 'Snakes' is a typo for 'snacks'. 'Obiang' is unclear, possibly 'childhood' or 'home'. The sentence is corrected for past tense and clarity.

× So good to eating snacks especially spices next like burgers, pizza and chow Mein.

✓ It was so good to eat snacks, especially spicy ones like burgers, pizza, and chow mein.

'To eating' is incorrect; it should be 'to eat'. 'Spices next' is incorrect; it should be 'spicy ones'. Prepositions and word forms are corrected.

× That's my favorite snacks or eating.

✓ Those are my favorite snacks to eat.

'That's' is singular but 'snacks' is plural; they should agree. 'Or eating' is unclear and unnecessary. The sentence is corrected for number agreement and clarity.

× That's a good question. I like to eat burger, pizza, chow Mein and some mosa and lot of things that's very spicy.

✓ That's a good question. I like to eat burgers, pizza, chow mein, momos, and lots of things that are very spicy.

'Burger' should be plural 'burgers' to match the list. 'Mosa' is likely 'momos'. 'Lot of things' should be 'lots of things'. 'That's' should be 'that are' to agree with plural 'things'. Pronouns and plural forms are corrected.