Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议练习使用完整句子，明确表达时间和原因，并避免重复和断句错误。

例: I usually eat snacks around midnight because I often feel hungry at that time. I find it hard to control myself from eating then.

提案: 回答内容混乱，逻辑不清晰，缺少连贯的句子和具体细节。建议用完整句子表达观点，说明原因，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I don't think eating too many snacks is healthy because it can make me gain weight. However, I try to control myself when I feel hungry.

提案: 语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议使用正确的时态和主谓一致，清晰表达过去的习惯，并给出具体原因。

例: Yes, when I was a child, I often ate snacks whenever I felt hungry. I loved them because they tasted good and were suitable for kids.

提案: 回答不连贯，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议用完整句子描述喜欢的零食，说明原因，并避免无关或错误的词汇。

例: I like to eat potato chips because they taste wonderful and are popular snacks during events like the Super Bowl, even though they contain a lot of fat.

× Always midnight.

✓ I always eat snacks at midnight.

句子缺少主语和谓语，导致结构不完整。应补充主语和谓语，使句子完整。

× I often feel hungry in the reasons take, so in that time I will.

✓ I often feel hungry for some reason, so at that time I will eat some snacks.

介词使用错误，'in the reasons take'不合适，应使用'for some reason'表示原因；'in that time'应改为'at that time'表示时间点。

× Eat some snacks.

✓ I eat some snacks.

句子缺少主语，导致结构不完整，应补充主语。

× For myself, and no, this is not.

✓ For myself, no, this is not true.

句子表达不清，缺少谓语，且代词使用不当，应补充谓语使句子完整。

× Else, but I cannot control myself.

✓ Nothing else, but I cannot control myself.

句子缺少主语，导致结构不完整，应补充主语。

× Absolutely.

✓ Absolutely, I think so.

单独使用副词作为回答，句子不完整，应补充主语和谓语。

× Now, as everyone knows, snacks.

✓ Now, as everyone knows, snacks are common.

句子缺少谓语，导致结构不完整，应补充谓语。

× And now it's healthy for everyone.

✓ And now, it's considered healthy for everyone.

句子缺少谓语，表达不完整，应补充谓语。

× I think it's too many snacks will make me.

✓ I think eating too many snacks will make me fat.

句子结构混乱，缺少主谓一致，应调整句子结构使其通顺。

× Fat so.

✓ Fat, so I try to control myself.

句子不完整，缺少主语和谓语，应补充完整。

× If I feel hungry.

✓ If I feel hungry, I always control myself.

句子不完整，缺少主句，应补充完整。

× I always tries.

✓ I always try.

主语是第一人称单数，动词不应加-s。

× Add some snacks.

✓ Eat some snacks.

动词搭配不当，通常说'eat snacks'而非'add snacks'。

× I think the taste of snacks is suitable for every kids.

✓ I think the taste of snacks is suitable for every kid.

'every'后应接单数名词，'kids'应改为'singular kid'。

× So this mean reason why I really love the snacks in my childhood.

✓ So this is the main reason why I really loved snacks in my childhood.

句子缺少谓语，时态不一致，应调整为过去时态并补充谓语。

× Potato chips, I think.

✓ I think potato chips are great.

句子结构不完整，应补充主谓结构。

× Is so wonderful and Super Bowl snacks for everyone whether.

✓ They are wonderful and popular snacks for everyone, whether...

句子缺少主语和谓语，结构混乱，应补充完整。

× The keys are the H Ness person.

✓ They are the key snacks for happiness.

句子表达不清，代词使用错误，应改为正确表达。

× Although. It will have a lot of fat.

✓ Although they contain a lot of fat.

句子断裂，应合并为完整句子。