Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答不清楚且不连贯，建议练习用简单明了的句子直接回答问题，并且保持回答的连贯性。

例: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon, around 3 or 4 pm, when I feel a little hungry between meals.

提案: 回答时要注意句子的完整性和逻辑性，避免断断续续。可以用连接词来组织句子，使表达更自然。

例: I think eating snacks is not very healthy, but having a few snacks occasionally is not bad for me.

提案: 回答中有很多语法和表达错误，建议练习用简单句子表达过去的习惯，并且注意时态和词汇的正确使用。

例: No, I didn't often eat snacks when I was young because my father, who is a doctor, didn't allow me to eat them since they contain a lot of sugar and fat.

提案: 回答时要注意句子的完整和流畅，避免断句和重复。可以多用形容词和原因来丰富内容。

例: I like to eat chocolate, especially dark chocolate, because it contains less sugar and has a slightly bitter taste that I enjoy.

× Are you really its legs? After. Non CI were killers.

✓ I usually eat snacks after school.

原句结构混乱，无法表达清楚意思。应使用完整句子表达时间和动作，建议使用'I usually eat snacks after school.'来表达通常吃零食的时间。

× I think that. A few slacks. Is not. Bad for me.

✓ I think that a few snacks are not bad for me.

原句中'a few slacks is not bad'中'a few'后应接复数名词，且谓语动词应与复数主语一致，故应改为'a few snacks are not bad'。

× No, I don't know off. And it's like the one I wasn't charged.

✓ No, I didn't often eat snacks when I was young.

原句中使用了错误的代词和词汇，导致句意不明。应使用正确的代词和动词时态表达过去经常吃零食的情况。

× My father is a doctor. He doesn't allow me to eat my men in slacks because they think the slacks contained match it sugar and fat.

✓ My father is a doctor. He doesn't allow me to eat many snacks because he thinks the snacks contain too much sugar and fat.

原句中'he thinks the slacks contained'时态和主谓不一致，且'slacks'应为'snacks'。应使用一般现在时和正确的名词形式。

× So I. It had slacks.

✓ So I didn't eat snacks.

原句时态错误，且句子不完整。应使用过去时态表达过去不吃零食的事实。

× I like to eat chocolate. He called.

✓ I like to eat chocolate.

原句中'He called'无意义且错误，应删除。

× I think chocolate is finishers.

✓ I think chocolate is delicious.

原句中'finishers'用词错误，应使用形容词'delicious'来形容巧克力的味道。

× And, uh, I like the. Dark chocolate best because it contains less sugar and. I can test the eat a bit of bitter.

✓ And, uh, I like dark chocolate best because it contains less sugar and I can taste a bit of bitterness.

原句中'can test the eat a bit of bitter'表达错误，应改为'can taste a bit of bitterness'，使用正确的动词和名词形式。