Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并使用正确的时态和语法。

例: I usually eat snacks during my leisure time, especially when I have nothing important to do.

提案: 表达有些混乱，词汇使用不当（如“Iaccessible”），建议使用更准确的词汇，并且句子结构更清晰。

例: I think eating snacks too often can harm our health, but eating them occasionally is acceptable and shouldn't cause any problems.

提案: 回答基本符合要求，但语法错误影响理解，如“banned me to do that”和“unhealthy to body”。建议使用正确的表达方式并丰富细节。

例: Yes, I used to eat snacks every day when I was a child, but my parents often forbade me because they thought it was unhealthy for my body.

提案: 回答中有语法和表达错误，如“prefer not and the potato chips”，建议明确表达喜欢的零食种类，并使用连贯的句子。

例: I like to eat potato chips because they satisfy my hunger and help me relax, especially when I'm hanging out with friends or watching movies.

× Well I usually it's not snacks during my leisure time, especially when I'm have nothing important to do.

✓ Well, I usually don't eat snacks during my leisure time, especially when I have nothing important to do.

句中“it's not snacks”结构不正确，应使用动词短语表达否定，且“I'm have”中动词形式错误，应为“I have”。建议使用“don't eat snacks”表示否定的习惯动作。

× I think eating snacks too often will do harm to our health, but it is Iaccessible and possible to eat snacks sometimes.

✓ I think eating snacks too often will do harm to our health, but it is accessible and possible to eat snacks sometimes.

单词“Iaccessible”拼写错误，应为“accessible”。此外，句中“it is accessible and possible to eat snacks sometimes”表达合理，无需其他修改。

× Yes, I usually ate snacks every day during my childhood but my parents always banned me to do that because they think it is very unhealthy to body.

✓ Yes, I usually ate snacks every day during my childhood but my parents always banned me from doing that because they thought it was very unhealthy for the body.

“banned me to do that”用法错误，正确搭配是“banned me from doing that”。此外，时态应保持一致，父母的想法应使用过去时“thought”，且“unhealthy to body”应改为“unhealthy for the body”。

× Well, I prefer not and the potato chips because I think they can satisfy my hunger and make me feel relaxing, especially when I'm hanging out with my friends or watching movies.

✓ Well, I prefer nuts and potato chips because I think they can satisfy my hunger and make me feel relaxed, especially when I'm hanging out with my friends or watching movies.

“prefer not and the potato chips”结构不正确，推测应为“prefer nuts and potato chips”。“make me feel relaxing”应改为“make me feel relaxed”，因为“relaxing”是形容词，表示使人放松的，而“relaxed”表示感到放松的状态。