Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答不够清晰，句子结构混乱，表达不自然。建议你直接回答问题，说明你什么时候吃零食，并用简单明了的句子表达原因。

例: I usually avoid eating snacks now because my parents want me to lose weight. So, I try to eat snacks only occasionally, maybe once a week.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，表达不完整，且内容不够具体。建议你明确表达零食是否健康，并给出具体原因。

例: I don't think eating snacks is healthy because most snacks contain a lot of fat and sugar, which can lead to weight gain.

提案: 回答不连贯，语法错误多，内容不明确。建议你用简单句子说明小时候是否经常吃零食，并解释原因。

例: When I was young, my parents did not allow me to eat snacks often, so I rarely ate them.

提案: 回答内容混乱，表达不清楚。建议你直接说出你喜欢的零食种类，或者说明你现在不喜欢吃零食的原因。

例: I used to like sweet snacks, but now I don't eat snacks because my parents want me to avoid gaining weight.

× Till we are nearest.

✓ I eat snacks until we are nearest.

原句结构不完整，缺少主语和谓语，导致句子不通顺。建议补充完整句子，使其表达清晰。

× I always keep keep me.

✓ I always keep myself.

“keep me”用法错误，应该用反身代词“myself”表示动作反射到自己。

× Keep my mom in the mouth to not eat snacks.

✓ I keep my mouth shut to not eat snacks for my mom.

原句中“in the mouth”用法不当，表达不清。应使用“keep my mouth shut”表示“闭嘴”，符合习惯表达。

× I always eat junk food which has many fat.

✓ I always eat junk food which has a lot of fat.

“many”用于可数名词，“fat”是不可数名词，应使用“a lot of”修饰不可数名词。

× my parents don't don't allow me to eat his neck, so it randomly and thus I.

✓ My parents didn't allow me to eat snacks, so I ate randomly and thus I...

原句中“his neck”应为“snacks”，且时态应为过去时，代词使用错误，句子不完整。

× I don't like it unfolded during his days assigned weight gain.

✓ I didn't like it before because of weight gain.

“it unfolded during his days assigned weight gain”表达混乱，代词使用错误，应简化表达并调整时态。

× My parents don't allow me to is next and for months is I I've I found that I surprisingly found that I don't have any interest in eating snakes.

✓ My parents don't allow me to eat snacks, and for months I have surprisingly found that I don't have any interest in eating snacks.

原句中“is next”和“snakes”用词错误，代词和动词形式混乱，需调整为正确表达。