Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答不够连贯，语法和词汇使用存在较大问题，导致表达不清晰。建议练习简单句型，明确表达时间和原因，并避免重复和无意义的词汇。

例: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon because I feel hungry between meals. However, I try not to eat too many snacks because they are not good for my health.

提案: 回答缺乏连贯性和完整的句子结构，表达不清楚。建议使用完整句子，明确表达观点并给出具体原因。

例: I think eating snacks is not very healthy because they often contain a lot of sugar and fat. Eating too many snacks can make me gain weight.

提案: 回答语法错误较多，表达不完整。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，清楚描述过去的习惯并给出具体细节。

例: Yes, when I was young, I often ate snacks because they were delicious. I especially liked sweet desserts.

提案: 回答中词汇使用不准确，句子结构混乱。建议使用准确的词汇描述喜欢的零食，并用连贯的句子表达原因。

例: I like to eat and bake cookies because they are sweet and have various flavors. Also, cookies are crispy, which I enjoy.

× Sometimes it is the snacks be 'cause sometimes snacks can.

✓ Sometimes it is the snacks because sometimes snacks can.

这里'snacks'是复数，前面不应该用单数形式的'is'，应保持复数形式。

× Phil can for my.

✓ Phil can for me.

句子结构混乱，'my'应改为宾格'me'，使句子更通顺。

× My stomach but we passed next are not good at our health.

✓ My stomach and we passed next are not good for our health.

句子结构不完整，缺少连接词，且'not good at'应改为'not good for'。

× I believe that is snacks is not good at our house.

✓ I believe that snacks are not good for our health.

'snacks'是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'are'，且表达更符合语境。

× Be 'cause snacks have many bad things.

✓ Because snacks have many bad things.

'Be 'cause'应为'Because'，且表达更正式。

× Eat some, maybe?

✓ Eating some may make me fat.

原句不完整，需补充主语和谓语，使句子完整。

× Make me be fat fatter. Than others.

✓ Make me fatter than others.

比较级用法错误，'fat'应改为'fatter'，且句子应连贯。

× Yes, when I was a young I often eat snacks becauses snacks have have many.

✓ Yes, when I was young I often ate snacks because snacks have many.

'a young'应去掉冠词，'eat'应改为过去式'ate'，'becauses'应为'because'。

× Desert many delicious.

✓ There were many delicious desserts.

缺少主语和谓语，且'dessert'应为复数形式'desserts'，时态应为过去式。

× So people, so.

✓ So did other people.

句子不完整，需补充谓语使句子完整。

× I am addicted to eat and cook cookies because cookies are sweetie and some tests are 30.

✓ I am addicted to eating and cooking cookies because cookies are sweet and some tastes are good.

'addicted to'后应接动名词形式，'sweetie'应为形容词'sweet'，'tests'应为'tastes'。

× They have verrieres tastes.

✓ They have various tastes.

'verrieres'拼写错误，应为'various'，表示多样的。

× And the cool he is crispy.

✓ And the cookies are crispy.

句子结构错误，'cool he'应为'cookies'，使句子完整且有意义。