Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I don't eat snacks very often now because I try to stay healthy. However, when I was a child, I used to enjoy snacks a lot because they were tasty and fun to eat.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu đơn giản, đồng thời dùng liên từ để nối ý.

例: I think some snacks are healthier now than before because they include vegetables and nutrients. However, many snacks today are sweeter and less healthy than in the past.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng nhưng thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết các ý bằng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young. After school, I usually asked my parents to buy me snacks as a reward for finishing my studies.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và nói lắp.

例: I like chewing gum because I can enjoy it for a long time. I also like other snacks like chips or cookies occasionally.

× I'm not really it's neck often nowadays because there's 2 ^2 for me

✓ I'm not really eating snacks often nowadays because there are too many for me

The original sentence misuses quantifiers and contains unclear expressions. '2 ^2' is not a proper quantifier. The correction uses 'too many' to indicate an excessive amount, which fits the context better.

× there's 2 ^2 for me

✓ there are too many for me

The phrase 'there's' is a contraction of 'there is' which is singular, but the subject refers to multiple items, so 'there are' is correct for plural subjects.

× I felt, I felt, I mean I felt that snack half like. A popular things that I always want to have and and I always.

✓ I felt that snacks were popular things that I always wanted to have.

The original sentence is fragmented and repetitive. The correction combines the ideas into a clear, grammatically correct sentence with proper tense and plural agreement.

× A popular things that I always want to have

✓ Popular things that I always wanted to have

The phrase 'A popular things' mixes singular article 'A' with plural noun 'things'. Removing 'A' and adjusting tense improves correctness.

× Is based on watching snack that we eat nowadays.

✓ Based on the snacks that we eat nowadays,

The original sentence lacks a subject and misuses 'watching'. The correction introduces a proper subject and corrects the noun form.

× Some snack healthy, healthier than in the past, such as some vegetable that.

✓ Some snacks are healthier than in the past, such as some vegetables.

The original sentence lacks the verb 'are' and misuses singular/plural forms. The correction adds the verb and pluralizes nouns appropriately.

× Try and have them any nutrient in theirs, but nowadays have some sweeter than the path.

✓ They try to have nutrients in them, but nowadays some are sweeter than in the past.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects verb forms and prepositions.

× Well, to be honest, it's always waiting.

✓ Well, to be honest, I was always waiting.

'It's always waiting' is incorrect here; the student likely meant to express a past habitual action, so 'I was always waiting' is appropriate.

× I and when I hit the end of the school.

✓ When I finished school,

The phrase 'I and when I hit the end of the school' is ungrammatical and unclear. The correction simplifies and clarifies the intended meaning.

× I always ask my ask my parents to buy me some snack like the present or the gift when I was still have excellent days.

✓ I always asked my parents to buy me some snacks as a present or gift when I was still having good days.

The original sentence has repetition, tense inconsistency, and incorrect noun forms. The correction fixes these issues and improves clarity.

× some snack like the present or the gift

✓ some snacks as a present or gift

'Snack' should be plural 'snacks' to match the context of multiple items.

× I always like, uh, I mean I always enjoyed chewing gums because it can eat in the longtime Ann is not squid than like oh.

✓ I always liked, uh, I mean I always enjoyed chewing gum because I can chew it for a long time and it is not as hard as, like, oh, two apples or some other snacks.

The original sentence has incorrect quantifiers ('chewing gums' should be 'chewing gum'), unclear expressions, and tense inconsistency. The correction addresses these issues.

× chewing gums

✓ chewing gum

'Chewing gum' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized.

× Ann is not squid than like oh.

✓ and it is not as hard as, like, oh,

The phrase 'Ann is not squid than like oh' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. The correction replaces it with a comparative structure using 'not as hard as'.