Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，句子断断续续，缺少完整的句子结构。建议练习连贯表达，避免句子碎片化，同时使用连接词使回答更自然流畅。

例: I usually eat snacks like chips when I feel comfortable and want to enjoy my free time because they help me relax.

提案: 表达中存在语法错误和用词不当，且句子结构不完整。建议加强语法练习，使用正确的时态和词汇，同时用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Although eating snacks is unhealthy and may harm my health, they make me feel relaxed and comfortable, so I still enjoy them occasionally.

提案: 回答内容混乱，句子不完整且含糊不清。建议简化表达，使用完整句子直接回答问题，并提供具体原因。

例: No, I did not often eat snacks when I was young because my family prohibited it, believing that snacks could harm my health and affect my ability to play ping pong.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和不自然的表达，句子断断续续。建议练习完整句子表达，使用正确的搭配和连接词。

例: I like to eat chips, especially with beer, which is my favorite combination when I watch TV or Netflix because they always keep me company.

× I eat snacks. When I feel. Comfortable, and I want to. Enjoying the free time. I will. I will eat snacks like chips and. It's really. Good and.

✓ I eat snacks when I feel comfortable and want to enjoy my free time. I will eat snacks like chips. They are really good.

原句断句不当，导致句子结构混乱。应将相关内容合并成完整句子，避免句子碎片。建议将断开的短句合并，形成完整的陈述句。

× It's unhealthy and. It maybe hurts my healthy, however. Snacks makes me feel relaxed. Comfortable, so. I'll eat. And it's really cool and.

✓ It's unhealthy and it may hurt my health; however, snacks make me feel relaxed and comfortable, so I'll eat them. It's really cool.

原句中'maybe'用作动词，正确应为'may'表示可能性；'makes'应与复数主语'snacks'一致用'make'。此外，句子断裂影响理解，应合并。

× No, not often my family prohibited. Me eating snacks because I think I thought I. The snacks can. Hurt my health and. Met me. To ping pong. Sheng. Pei.

✓ No, not often. My family prohibited me from eating snacks because I thought the snacks could hurt my health and affect my ping pong training.

原句时态混乱，'think'应为过去时'thought'，'can'应为过去时'could'。此外，'prohibited me eating'应改为'prohibited me from eating'，句子结构需调整。

× Of course, chips, chips with beers is always a good partner and. It's my favorite set. When I? Watch T V or watch. Netflix. They always. Be my side.

✓ Of course, chips and beer are always good partners. They're my favorite snacks when I watch TV or Netflix. They are always by my side.

'chips'和'beers'为复数，谓语应使用复数形式'are'；'be my side'应为'by my side'，介词使用错误。句子断裂需合并。