Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不连贯，句子不完整，缺乏清晰的表达。建议用完整句子直接回答问题，并补充具体时间点。

例: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon, around 3 or 4 pm, after finishing my lunch.

提案: 回答表达不清晰，句子断断续续。建议用完整句子表达观点，并具体说明原因。

例: No, I don't think eating snacks is healthy because many snacks contain harmful chemicals and additives.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误较多。建议用完整句子直接回答，并解释原因。

例: No, I didn't often eat snacks when I was young because I knew they were unhealthy for my body.

提案: 回答不连贯，表达混乱。建议用完整句子列举喜欢的零食，并说明偏好。

例: I like to eat potato chips, cookies, and candies. However, I prefer salty snacks more than sweet ones.

× I openly. Eat snack. After meal.

✓ I usually eat snacks after meals.

原句句子结构混乱，缺少主谓宾完整结构。应将断句合并，补充缺失的词汇，使句子完整通顺。

× I openly. Eat snack. After meal.

✓ I usually eat snacks after meals.

snack和meal应使用复数形式，因为通常指多次吃零食和多次用餐。

× Max. No. Because it can have many. Chemical substances that are bad for your health.

✓ No, because it can contain many chemical substances that are bad for your health.

原句断句不当，缺少连贯性。应合并句子，使用正确的动词contain替代have，表达更准确。

× Max. No. Because it can have many. Chemical substances that are bad for your health.

✓ No, because it can contain many chemical substances that are bad for your health.

many用于可数名词，chemical substances正确使用many，但句子中断句导致理解困难。

× Did you often eat snacks when you were young?

✓ Did you often eat snacks when you were young?

该句无语法错误，符合过去时态的使用。

× No, because it is very unhealthy for my body so. But our young snacks.

✓ No, because it was very unhealthy for my body. But we ate snacks when we were young.

原句结构混乱，缺少主谓宾，且时态不一致。应调整句子结构，使用过去时态表达过去的习惯。

× No, because it is very unhealthy for my body so. But our young snacks.

✓ No, because it was very unhealthy for my body. But we ate snacks when we were young.

原句中“our young snacks”用词错误，应使用主语代词we表示“我们”，并补充动词。

× Potato chips, cookies, candies, etc. But I like salty are. Facts, then. Sweet snacks.

✓ Potato chips, cookies, candies, etc. But I like salty snacks more than sweet snacks.

原句中“salty are. Facts, then.”无意义且词形错误，应改为“salty snacks”，并正确表达比较关系。

× Potato chips, cookies, candies, etc. But I like salty are. Facts, then. Sweet snacks.

✓ Potato chips, cookies, candies, etc. But I like salty snacks more than sweet snacks.

比较时应明确比较对象，使用more than连接两个名词短语，表达更清晰。