Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer should be more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific details about the weather. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases.

例: The weather where I live varies, but mostly it is hot and sunny during the summer months because my country experiences a warm climate.

提案: Try to express your preferences clearly with correct grammar. Use linking words to explain reasons logically and avoid repetition. Be specific about why you prefer hot weather.

例: I prefer hot weather because I enjoy eating ice cream and it helps me stay healthy. In contrast, cold weather often makes me feel unwell.

提案: Your answer should be clearer and more coherent. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons for your preference. Avoid vague phrases like 'lots of creations and lots of something.'

例: I prefer dry weather because clothes dry quickly, which is very convenient. However, sometimes I enjoy wet weather because it helps plants grow.

提案: Answer directly and use correct grammar. Explain briefly why you do or do not check the forecast. Avoid repeating the same idea.

例: No, I do not usually check the weather forecast because I prefer to dress according to how I feel each day.

提案: Your answer should be more structured and clear. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples of climate change effects. Avoid grammatical errors and unclear phrases.

例: Climate change has caused increased greenhouse gas emissions, leading to extreme weather events. Deforestation also contributes to this problem, making it harder for people to adapt.

提案: Make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. Clearly state your preference and reasons, using linking words. Avoid vague expressions like 'lots of creations.'

例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because I enjoy experiencing new environments and beautiful weather, especially warm and sunny places.

× There are different types of weather I am live in but it the mostly summer weather because it's in my country there are lots of hot.

✓ There are different types of weather where I live, but it is mostly summer weather because in my country it is very hot.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'I am live in' instead of 'where I live' and 'it the mostly summer weather' instead of 'it is mostly summer weather'. Also, 'there are lots of hot' is incomplete and should be 'it is very hot'. The correction fixes the structure and verb usage to properly express the idea.

× My favorite weather is hot and summer season because when I am eat ice cream and something cold that I am not easily sick and when I am in a cold season I am eat ice cream and cold something so I am easily sick.

✓ My favorite weather is hot and summer season because when I eat ice cream and something cold, I do not get sick easily, but when I am in a cold season and eat ice cream and cold things, I get sick easily.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'I am eat' instead of 'I eat'. The verb 'eat' should be in the base form after 'when I'. Also, 'something cold' and 'cold something' are awkward; 'something cold' and 'cold things' are better. The correction improves verb form and clarity.

× But in dry weather there are lots of creations and lots of something.

✓ But in dry weather, there are lots of creations and many other things.

The phrase 'lots of something' is vague and ungrammatical. 'Lots of' should be followed by a plural noun or uncountable noun. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects the structure.

× When I am washing the clothes, they are easily dry.

✓ When I wash the clothes, they dry easily.

The original sentence uses 'I am washing' which is acceptable but less natural here; simple present 'I wash' fits better for habitual action. Also, 'they are easily dry' is incorrect; it should be 'they dry easily' to correctly use the verb and adverb.

× No, I don't kind of any habit to checking the weather forecast and I never checked the weather forecast.

✓ No, I don't have the habit of checking the weather forecast and I have never checked the weather forecast.

The phrase 'don't kind of any habit to checking' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'don't have the habit of checking'. Also, 'never checked' should be 'have never checked' to match present perfect tense for experience.

× There are different kinds of effect of climate change in recent year because they encourages and enhance the gas emissions and also different kinds of weather and it is a quite challenging for people because they cut the trees and also and they encourage the climate change.

✓ There are different kinds of effects of climate change in recent years because they encourage and enhance gas emissions and also cause different kinds of weather. It is quite challenging for people because they cut down trees and also encourage climate change.

The original sentence has singular/plural mismatches: 'effect' should be 'effects', 'recent year' should be 'recent years'. 'They encourages' should be 'they encourage' to match plural subject. 'Cut the trees' is better as 'cut down trees'. The correction fixes these issues for grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, I mostly like to visit other cities that have different climates from I live because there are lots of creations and lots of, uh, beautiful weather that I have ever seen and I like only hot weather that I have ever seen.

✓ Yes, I mostly like to visit other cities that have different climates from where I live because there are lots of creations and lots of beautiful weather that I have seen, and I only like hot weather that I have seen.

The phrase 'different climates from I live' is incorrect; it should be 'different climates from where I live'. 'I have ever seen' is better as 'I have seen' in this context. 'I like only hot weather' is corrected to 'I only like hot weather' for natural word order.