Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể. Ví dụ, bạn có thể mô tả đặc điểm thời tiết từng mùa một cách ngắn gọn và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I live in Hanoi, which has four distinct seasons: spring, summer, autumn, and winter. However, most of the year tends to be quite hot and humid, especially during the summer months.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Sử dụng câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ có liên kết logic. Hãy dùng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lặp từ như 'I like cold weather' nhiều lần.

例: I prefer cold weather because during autumn and winter, I feel more relaxed and less tired after school. Also, I dislike sweating under the hot sun, so cooler temperatures suit me better.

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý và tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'more cleaner'. Ngoài ra, nên dùng đại từ phù hợp và tránh lặp từ.

例: I prefer dry weather to wet weather because it makes the environment feel cleaner and more comfortable. Also, my house stays dry, which is more pleasant to live in.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc ngữ pháp đúng và câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lặp từ. Ví dụ, thay vì 'I'm not have', nên dùng 'I don't have'.

例: I don't usually check the weather forecast daily because it doesn't bother me much. However, before a trip or an important day, I always check to see if it will rain.

提案: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu chủ đề và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể, có liên kết logic. Hãy dùng từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý kiến về tác động của biến đổi khí hậu.

例: In recent years, climate change has caused more extreme weather, making life harder for people. For example, increased pollution from buildings and traffic contributes to global warming.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc ngữ pháp chính xác và câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Dùng liên từ để kết nối ý và tránh lỗi như 'I really excited' nên là 'I am really excited'.

例: Yes, I am really excited to visit cities with different climates from mine because it will give me new experiences, especially places with cold weather.

× in here we have 4 season, spring, summer, autumn and winter

✓ in here we have 4 seasons, spring, summer, autumn and winter

The word 'season' should be plural 'seasons' because it refers to multiple seasons, not just one.

× almost uh, every time in the year is a hot weather

✓ almost every time in the year the weather is hot

'Weather' is an uncountable noun and does not take 'a'. Also, 'every time' should be followed by a singular verb and the sentence structure needs adjustment for clarity.

× in no winter or autumn I feel more relaxed and not and I'm not be exhausted after school because of hot weather

✓ in winter or autumn I feel more relaxed and I'm not exhausted after school because of hot weather

The phrase 'in no winter or autumn' is incorrect; it should be 'in winter or autumn'. Also, 'I'm not be exhausted' is incorrect; it should be 'I'm not exhausted'.

× I really hate sun so I don't want to be sweating so I like cold weather

✓ I really hate the sun so I don't want to be sweating, so I like cold weather

The noun 'sun' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to the sun as a specific object.

× dry weather makes everything around me seems like it's more cleaner

✓ dry weather makes everything around me seem like it's cleaner

The verb 'makes' should be followed by the base form 'seem' not 'seems'. Also, 'more cleaner' is incorrect; 'cleaner' alone is sufficient.

× Or they will be more comfortable and relaxed and your house will not be so wet

✓ It will be more comfortable and relaxed and your house will not be so wet

The pronoun 'they' is incorrect here because it refers to 'everything' which is singular or uncountable; 'it' is the correct pronoun.

× I'm not have the habit of checking the weather forecast every day because I don't mind it too much

✓ I don't have the habit of checking the weather forecast every day because I don't mind it too much

The phrase 'I'm not have' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I don't have' for expressing habits.

× I will check the weather forecast to know that day is rainy or not

✓ I will check the weather forecast to know whether that day will be rainy or not

The sentence lacks proper structure for expressing uncertainty; 'whether' and future tense 'will be' are needed.

× the climate change in the recent year in the trend that everything is being harder

✓ the climate change in recent years is trending so that everything is becoming harder

'Year' should be plural 'years' to indicate recent period. Also, sentence structure is awkward and needs correction for clarity.

× I think the main effect is that the the human because they are have a lot of buildings or the traffic so

✓ I think the main effect is on humans because there are a lot of buildings and traffic

'The human' is incorrect; 'humans' is correct. 'They are have' is incorrect; 'there are' is correct. Also, 'or the traffic' should be 'and traffic'.

× Yes, I really excited to visit all the cities that have a different climate from where I like

✓ Yes, I am really excited to visit all the cities that have a different climate from where I live

The verb 'am' is missing after 'I'. Also, 'where I like' is incorrect; it should be 'where I live'.

× especially the country that have the cold atmosphere

✓ especially countries that have a cold atmosphere

'Country' should be plural 'countries' to match 'all the cities' and 'have' is correct for plural subject. Also, 'the cold atmosphere' can be 'a cold atmosphere'.