Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Améliorez la clarté et la structure de votre réponse en répondant directement à la question avec une phrase simple et en ajoutant des détails spécifiques. Évitez les phrases confuses et les répétitions inutiles.

例: I live in the northeastern part of Bangladesh, where the weather is usually hot and humid. During most of the year, the temperature can be quite high, which makes it uncomfortable to stay outside for long periods.

提案: Répondez directement à la question avec une phrase claire, puis expliquez votre préférence avec des raisons précises. Évitez les répétitions et les phrases peu claires.

例: I prefer cool weather because hot summers in my region can be very uncomfortable. Many people enjoy summer activities, but I find the heat tiring, so I wish for colder weather.

提案: Répondez clairement à la question et expliquez votre préférence avec des détails spécifiques. Utilisez des mots de liaison pour rendre votre réponse cohérente et évitez les phrases incomplètes.

例: I prefer dry weather because hot and humid conditions make me feel tired. When the weather is dry, I can enjoy many outdoor activities comfortably.

提案: Répondez directement à la question en expliquant clairement votre habitude. Utilisez des phrases complètes et évitez les répétitions pour rendre votre réponse naturelle et compréhensible.

例: I don't usually check the weather forecast, but two days ago I checked it on my phone because I was planning to go out with my friends.

提案: Répondez directement à la question avec des idées claires et spécifiques sur les effets du changement climatique. Évitez les phrases confuses et hors sujet, et ne posez pas de questions à l'examinateur.

例: Climate change has caused more extreme weather events like floods and droughts in recent years. This affects people's lives and the environment negatively.

提案: Répondez clairement à la question avec une phrase simple, puis expliquez votre choix avec des détails spécifiques. Faites attention à la grammaire et à la structure des phrases.

例: Yes, I would like to visit Cox's Bazar because its climate is very different from my area. I am curious to experience the cooler and more humid weather there.

× I live northeastern part of Bangladesh.

✓ I live in the northeastern part of Bangladesh.

The preposition 'in' is required before 'the northeastern part' to indicate location correctly.

× I heard the weather is hot and doing the most of the yards the temperature can be quite and uncomfortable which are something makes it uncomfortable.

✓ I heard the weather is hot, and most of the year the temperature can be quite uncomfortable, which makes it unpleasant.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'Doing the most of the yards' is incorrect; it should be 'most of the year'. Also, 'which are something makes it uncomfortable' is incorrect; it should be 'which makes it unpleasant' to agree with singular subject.

× Personally I prefer a cool weather because as I am Bengali so most of time people love to culture culture doing the summer season.

✓ Personally, I prefer cool weather because, as I am Bengali, most of the time people love to enjoy the culture during the summer season.

'A cool weather' is incorrect because 'weather' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. Also, 'most of time' should be 'most of the time'. The phrase 'love to culture culture doing the summer season' is unclear and corrected to 'love to enjoy the culture during the summer season' for clarity and grammar.

× It's made uncomfortable and it's my trial.

✓ It makes me uncomfortable and tired.

'It's made uncomfortable' is incorrect; the subject 'it' causes the feeling, so 'makes me uncomfortable' is correct. 'It's my trial' is unclear and likely meant to be 'tired'.

× That's why I pray for cold weather.

✓ That's why I hope for cold weather.

'Pray' is not commonly used to express preference for weather; 'hope' is more appropriate here.

× In my Pacific team I always prefer dry weather because as I am Bengali so hot weather is very uncomfortable and make tired that's why I love to dry weather.

✓ In my opinion, I always prefer dry weather because, as I am Bengali, hot weather is very uncomfortable and makes me tired; that's why I love dry weather.

'In my Pacific team' is incorrect; likely meant 'In my opinion'. 'Make tired' should be 'makes me tired'. Also, 'love to dry weather' is incorrect; it should be 'love dry weather'.

× Doing the dry weather I will have too many activities in outdoor but but some are.

✓ During dry weather, I can do many outdoor activities, but some are limited.

'Doing the dry weather' is incorrect; 'During dry weather' is correct. The sentence is incomplete and unclear; it is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Actually it is depends my situation but last two days ago I checked my own mobile and I checked my own.

✓ Actually, it depends on my situation, but two days ago I checked my own mobile.

'It is depends' is incorrect; 'it depends' is correct. 'Last two days ago' is redundant; 'two days ago' suffices. 'I checked my own' is incomplete and removed.

× I checked weather because it's not my habit but I plan with my friends and I we are go to.

✓ I checked the weather because it's not my habit, but I planned with my friends, and we were going out.

The sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. 'I plan with my friends and I we are go to' is corrected to 'I planned with my friends, and we were going out' for clarity and correct tense.

× It is creating SAA's facility of a leader leadership which is not available from other.

✓ It is creating opportunities for leadership which are not available elsewhere.

The original sentence is unclear and uses incorrect prepositions and phrases. 'Facility of a leader leadership' is incorrect; 'opportunities for leadership' is correct. 'Not available from other' is corrected to 'not available elsewhere'.

× What do you think? Are you effective of the climate change?

✓ What do you think? Are you affected by climate change?

'Are you effective of the climate change?' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'Are you affected by climate change?' to ask about impact.

× Yes, definitely I would like to visit others city which is located Cox Bazaar.

✓ Yes, definitely I would like to visit another city which is located in Cox's Bazar.

'Others city' is incorrect; it should be 'another city' for singular. Also, 'located Cox Bazaar' needs the preposition 'in' and the correct place name 'Cox's Bazar'.

× It's temperature and weather is difficult different on my area that's why I would like to visit this.

✓ Its temperature and weather are quite different from my area; that's why I would like to visit there.

'It's' should be 'Its' (possessive). 'Is difficult different' is incorrect; 'are quite different' is correct. 'On my area' should be 'from my area'. 'Visit this' is incorrect; 'visit there' is appropriate.