Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và chính xác hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn.

例: I live in a place where the weather changes a lot. For example, this morning it was sunny, but in the afternoon and evening, it rained heavily, causing floods in some areas.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và từ vựng chính xác hơn, tránh lặp từ và hoàn thành câu đầy đủ. Sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I prefer cold weather because I feel uncomfortable when it's hot and have to use many fans. In cold weather, I can wear warm clothes like jackets and scarves, which make me feel more comfortable.

提案: Bạn đã trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng cần chú ý cách dùng từ và ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Nên dùng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lỗi nhỏ.

例: I prefer dry weather because Vietnam is a tropical country with a lot of rain. Heavy rain makes my clothes wet and uncomfortable, so dry weather helps me feel more comfortable and relaxed.

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt lặp lại. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh dùng đại từ không rõ ràng.

例: I don't usually check the weather forecast myself, but my mom does. She often uses Google Maps or Google Weather to check forecasts on TV for different areas.

提案: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu hoàn chỉnh để truyền đạt ý tốt hơn.

例: In recent years, climate change has affected the Earth a lot, especially the weather. For example, in Vietnam, it used to rain more in winter, but now it often rains more in summer than in winter.

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sắp xếp ý hợp lý, dùng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn.

例: Yes, I would love to visit cities in China because they have snow, which is very beautiful. I enjoy playing in the snow, and I hope to visit in the future to see my idols and buy my favorite goods.

× Well, I live in quantity and the weather today is very different from the normal day.

✓ Well, I live in Quang Tri and the weather today is very different from a normal day.

The word 'quantity' is incorrect as a place name; it should be 'Quang Tri', a location in Vietnam. Also, 'the normal day' should be 'a normal day' because it refers to any typical day, not a specific one.

× In the morning it's rain, it's sunny, but in the afternoon and in the night they have lots of rains and it's make the floods in some areas.

✓ In the morning it rains and is sunny, but in the afternoon and at night there is a lot of rain and it causes floods in some areas.

The verb 'it's rain' is incorrect; the correct form is 'it rains' for present simple tense. 'They have lots of rains' is incorrect; 'there is a lot of rain' is correct. 'It's make' should be 'it causes' to agree with singular subject and correct verb form.

× In the morning it's rain, it's sunny, but in the afternoon and in the night they have lots of rains and it's make the floods in some areas.

✓ In the morning it rains and is sunny, but in the afternoon and at night there is a lot of rain and it causes floods in some areas.

'Lots of rains' is incorrect; 'rain' is an uncountable noun and should be used with 'a lot of' or 'much' instead of 'lots of' when referring to rain in general.

× it's make the floods in some areas.

✓ it causes floods in some areas.

The verb 'make' should be in third person singular form 'makes' or better replaced with 'causes' to fit the context and subject 'it'.

× I prefer cold weather because when it's hot I feel uncomfortable and need to use many fans to stay cool, cool and fresh.

✓ I prefer cold weather because when it's hot I feel uncomfortable and need to use many fans to stay cool and fresh.

The repetition of 'cool' is unnecessary and incorrect; it should be removed for clarity.

× On the other hand, in cold weather I usually wear warm clothes like jackets or shocks or scarves which find me feel more comfortable and.

✓ On the other hand, in cold weather I usually wear warm clothes like jackets, socks, or scarves which make me feel more comfortable.

'Shocks' is a misspelling of 'socks'. 'Which find me feel' is incorrect; it should be 'which make me feel'. The sentence was incomplete and needed correction for clarity.

× Well, I prefer dry weather more than wet weather because in Vietnam it's a tropical country, so it's really raining a lot.

✓ Well, I prefer dry weather more than wet weather because Vietnam is a tropical country, so it rains a lot.

'In Vietnam it's a tropical country' is incorrect; it should be 'Vietnam is a tropical country'. 'It's really raining a lot' is awkward; 'it rains a lot' is more natural.

× My mom usually use the Google Maps or the Google weather to check the forecast in different areas in the TV's.

✓ My mom usually uses Google Maps or Google Weather to check the forecast for different areas on TV.

'Use' should be 'uses' for third person singular. 'The Google weather' should be 'Google Weather'. 'In the TV's' is incorrect; it should be 'on TV'. Also, 'the forecast in different areas' should be 'for different areas'.

× My mom usually use the Google Maps or the Google weather to check the forecast in different areas in the TV's.

✓ My mom usually uses Google Maps or Google Weather to check the forecast for different areas on TV.

The verb 'use' must be in third person singular form 'uses' to agree with the subject 'My mom'.

× We usually have the weather forecast to watch and they don't need anything.

✓ We usually watch the weather forecast and don't need anything else.

'Have the weather forecast to watch' is awkward; 'watch the weather forecast' is correct. 'They don't need anything' is unclear; 'don't need anything else' clarifies the meaning.

× In recent year, climate change effects our earth a lot, especially in weathers.

✓ In recent years, climate change has affected our Earth a lot, especially the weather.

'In recent year' should be plural 'years'. 'Effects' as a verb is incorrect here; 'has affected' is the correct past participle form. 'Weathers' is incorrect; 'weather' is uncountable.

× Though many areas in the earth have effects hardly harsh in weathers by climate change.

✓ Many areas on Earth have been harshly affected by climate change in terms of weather.

'In the earth' should be 'on Earth'. 'Have effects hardly harsh in weathers' is incorrect; 'have been harshly affected' is correct. 'Weathers' should be 'weather'.

× For example, Vietnamese used to have more rains in the winter, but now in the summer it usually more have rains than in the winter.

✓ For example, Vietnam used to have more rain in the winter, but now in the summer it usually has more rain than in the winter.

'Vietnamese' refers to people; 'Vietnam' is the country. 'More rains' is incorrect; 'more rain' is correct as 'rain' is uncountable. 'It usually more have rains' is incorrect; 'it usually has more rain' is correct.

× Yes, I would love to visit China's that have different climates from Vietnam because China have snow, white, snow, beauty, snow and I love to play with it.

✓ Yes, I would love to visit cities in China that have different climates from Vietnam because China has snow, white snow, beautiful snow, and I love to play with it.

'China's' is incorrect; it should be 'cities in China'. 'China have' should be 'China has'. The phrase 'white, snow, beauty, snow' is awkward; corrected to 'white snow, beautiful snow'.

× So I have a good half a chance to visit it in the future because I would visit my idols and my and buy my favorite goods.

✓ So I have a good chance to visit it in the future because I would visit my idols and buy my favorite goods.

'Half a chance' is awkward; 'a good chance' is better. The phrase 'my and buy' is incomplete; corrected to 'and buy'. The sentence is adjusted for clarity.