Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is too short and does not directly describe the weather. Try to give a complete sentence and add some details about the weather conditions.

例: The weather where I live is usually hot and sunny during the summer, with temperatures often reaching above 30 degrees Celsius.

提案: Your answer does not address the question about weather preference. Make sure to answer the question directly and provide reasons or examples.

例: I prefer cold weather because it feels refreshing and comfortable, especially when I can wear warm clothes.

提案: Your answer is clear but could be improved by adding reasons or examples to support your preference.

例: I like dry weather because it is easier to go outside and enjoy outdoor activities without worrying about rain.

提案: Your answer is unclear and does not directly respond to the question. Try to answer directly and provide details about when and how often you check the forecast.

例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before leaving home to plan my day accordingly.

提案: Your answer is inappropriate and does not address the question. Try to explain the effects of climate change with specific details.

例: Climate change has caused more extreme weather events, such as floods and heatwaves, which affect people's lives and the environment.

提案: Your answer is vague and unclear. Try to clearly state your interest in visiting cities with different climates and explain why.

例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates, such as a cold city in the mountains, because I want to experience new weather and cultures.

× Summer.

✓ It is summer.

The answer 'Summer.' is a sentence fragment lacking a verb. To form a complete sentence, a verb such as 'is' is needed. The correct response is 'It is summer.' which properly answers the question about the weather.

× I like cold water.

✓ I like cold weather.

The student said 'I like cold water.' which is likely a mistake because the question was about weather preference. The adjective 'cold' should modify 'weather' not 'water' to make sense in context.

× Mark, I've done the check.

✓ Mark, I've checked the weather.

The phrase 'I've done the check' is awkward and unnatural. The correct past participle verb is 'checked' to indicate the action of checking the weather forecast. Also, 'the check' is vague; specifying 'the weather' clarifies the meaning.

× It's very good.

✓ It's very bad.

The question asked about the effects of climate change, which are generally negative. Saying 'It's very good.' is likely incorrect in context. The student should say 'It's very bad.' to reflect the negative impact.