Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法错误较多，且表达不够自然。建议注意主谓一致和时态的正确使用，同时避免冗余表达。

例: I live in Nanjing, located in southeast China. Thanks to its location, the weather is quite pleasant with plenty of sunshine in both winter and summer.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议简洁表达观点，并用连词连接句子。

例: I prefer cold weather because wearing many clothes makes me feel safe. Also, hot weather makes me sweat easily.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用正确的句型和词汇，避免重复，并且逻辑更清晰。

例: I prefer wet weather because dry weather makes my hair tangled and hard to manage. Moreover, wet weather is better for my skin.

提案: 回答中语法和用词错误较多，表达不够自然。建议使用正确的副词和词汇，句子结构更完整。

例: Actually, I don't check the weather often. I only check it when I have outdoor plans. For example, I will check the forecast tomorrow to decide what clothes to wear or if I need to bring an umbrella.

提案: 回答中断续和语法错误影响表达。建议简洁明了地描述观点，并用连词连接句子。

例: I think climate change has made summers hotter and winters colder recently. As a result, I use the air conditioner more often at home.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇和表达不流畅的问题。建议使用连贯的句子表达愿望和原因。

例: Yes, I'd love to visit other cities with different climates. For example, the northwest of China is much drier than the eastern part, and I want to see the unique scenery there.

× it's have many sunshines both in winter and summer.

✓ it has much sunshine both in winter and summer.

这里's是it is的缩写，后面不能直接跟have，应该用第三人称单数形式has。sunshine是不可数名词，不能用复数形式sunshines，应该用单数形式。

× if the weather is too hot I I I will be easily going sweaty.

✓ if the weather is too hot I will easily get sweaty.

这里的表达中，'will be easily going sweaty'结构不正确，应该用will + 动词原形，且get sweaty是固定搭配，表示出汗。

× the dry weather will make my hair being knotted

✓ the dry weather will make my hair knot

make后面接宾语加动词原形，不能用being knotted。knotted是过去分词，表示被打结，动词原形knot表示打结。

× But wet weather is not to my skin, so I prefer wet weather.

✓ But wet weather is good for my skin, so I prefer wet weather.

短语'not to my skin'不正确，应该用good for my skin表示对皮肤有益。

× I'm not very occasionally to check the weather, only if I have an outside plane.

✓ I don't check the weather very often, only if I have an outdoor plan.

'not very occasionally'表达不正确，应该用'not very often'或'don't check very often'。另外，outside plane应为outdoor plan。

× if I need to take a umbrella with me.

✓ if I need to take an umbrella with me.

umbrella以元音音素开头，前面冠词应为an而不是a。

× this year the summer become hotter and winter become colder.

✓ this year the summer has become hotter and winter has become colder.

描述今年的变化，应该用现在完成时，表示从过去到现在的变化，become的第三人称单数形式是becomes，但这里用现在完成时has become更合适。

× the frequency of using air conditioner has increased.

✓ the frequency of using the air conditioner has increased.

air conditioner前缺少定冠词the，表示特指。

× I heard about the northwest of China.

✓ I heard about the northwest region of China.

northwest单独使用时不够明确，通常用northwest region表示中国的西北地区。

× It's it's much drier than the Easter part,

✓ It's much drier than the eastern part,

Easter是复活节，形容词应为eastern，表示东方的。