Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınız doğal ancak biraz dağınık ve tekrarlayıcı. Daha net ve akıcı olmak için cümlelerinizi sadeleştirin ve gereksiz tekrarları azaltın. Örneğin, sabah ve öğleden sonra hava durumunu karşılaştırırken daha açık ve kısa ifadeler kullanabilirsiniz.

例: The weather in Marathon, Turkey, is quite changeable. In the morning, it feels very hot, almost like living in a desert, but in the afternoon, it becomes much cooler, similar to the climate in Norway.

提案: Cümleniz anlaşılır değil ve bazı kelimeler yanlış kullanılmış. Daha açık ve doğru ifadeler kullanarak neden soğuk havayı tercih ettiğinizi açıklayın. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi daha kısa ve net tutmaya çalışın.

例: I prefer cold weather because I enjoy wearing layers of clothing. When it's hot, I feel uncomfortable and can't dress the way I like.

提案: Cümlenizde bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar var. Daha düzgün cümle yapıları kullanarak fikrinizi net ifade edin. Ayrıca, neden kuru havayı tercih ettiğinizi daha spesifik açıklayın.

例: I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes me feel uncomfortable and sweaty, which I dislike. Also, dry weather is usually cooler, which suits me better.

提案: Cümleniz genel olarak anlaşılır ancak zaman uyumu ve kelime seçimi geliştirilebilir. Daha doğru zaman kullanımı ve daha akıcı ifadelerle cevap verebilirsiniz.

例: I usually check the weather forecast only when I plan to go outside. So, I check it about once a week or every couple of weeks.

提案: Cevabınız çok genel ve tekrarlayıcı. İklim değişikliğinin etkilerini daha spesifik örneklerle açıklayın ve cümlelerinizi çeşitlendirin.

例: Climate change has caused unusual weather patterns recently. For example, winters are warmer than before, and summers are less predictable, which affects agriculture and daily life.

提案: Cümlenizde bazı dilbilgisi hataları var. Daha doğru zaman kullanımı ve daha akıcı ifadelerle neden Norveç'i ziyaret etmek istediğinizi açıklayın.

例: Since winters here are mild, I would like to visit Norway to experience a colder winter. I'm really eager to enjoy snow and winter activities there.

× I'm living in Marathon, Turkey, and it's kind of complicated actually, because when in the morning I feel like I'm living in the hell and afternoon, right after afternoon I feel like I'm I'm living in Norway.

✓ I live in Marathon, Turkey, and it's kind of complicated actually, because in the morning I feel like I'm living in hell and in the afternoon, right after afternoon, I feel like I'm living in Norway.

The verb 'I'm living' is incorrectly used in the present continuous tense for a permanent situation; the simple present 'I live' is appropriate. Also, 'when in the morning' should be 'in the morning' and 'in the hell' should be 'in hell' without the article. Repetition of 'I'm' is a mistake. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I think I prefer called writers because because I love wearing multiple clothes and when it's hot, I can't do that because just because I prefer cold weather and I don't know why brings cold weather is more like, so it's on me.

✓ I think I prefer cold weather because I love wearing multiple clothes and when it's hot, I can't do that. I just prefer cold weather and I don't know why, but cold weather suits me more.

The phrase 'called writers' is incorrect; it should be 'cold weather'. The sentence structure is confusing and contains unnecessary repetition. 'Brings cold weather is more like, so it's on me' is unclear and corrected to 'cold weather suits me more' for clarity and correctness.

× Well I prefer dry better because it gets boring when it when the weather is wet.

✓ Well, I prefer dry weather because it gets boring when the weather is wet.

The phrase 'prefer dry better' is incorrect; 'prefer dry weather' is correct. Also, the repetition 'when it when' is a mistake. Adding 'weather' after 'dry' clarifies the meaning.

× It makes you sweet all the time and I really hate sweating.

✓ It makes you sweat all the time and I really hate sweating.

The word 'sweet' is a misspelling of 'sweat'. Correcting this changes the meaning to the intended one.

× I'm only checking the weather forecast when I decided to go outside, so I'm not checking that much.

✓ I only check the weather forecast when I decide to go outside, so I don't check it that much.

The verb tense 'decided' is past tense, but the context requires present tense 'decide'. Also, 'I'm only checking' is better as 'I only check' for habitual action. 'That much' is better preceded by 'don't check it' for clarity.

× I only check one in a week, maybe one in a couple of weeks, not that often.

✓ I only check it once a week, maybe once every couple of weeks, not that often.

The phrase 'one in a week' is incorrect; 'once a week' is the correct expression. Similarly, 'one in a couple of weeks' should be 'once every couple of weeks' for clarity.

× Climate change affects the world in a bad way.

✓ Climate change affects the world in a bad way.

This sentence is grammatically correct and requires no correction.

× You can see it's not that cold at all and not that hot at all recently.

✓ You can see that recently it's not that cold at all and not that hot at all.

The adverb 'recently' should be placed before the verb phrase for correct sentence flow.

× I really want to had a better winter experience.

✓ I really want to have a better winter experience.

The verb 'had' is past tense, but after 'want to' the base form 'have' should be used.